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<blockquote data-quote="Lalato" data-source="post: 749629" data-attributes="member: 9171">I'm not sure about &quot;The Russell&quot;...&nbsp; I'm trying to think of a way to call the &quot;mayor&quot; Administrator or Moderator, but I'm coming up blank.How about Founder instead of Mayor or Russell?One of the obvious hooks is that the city is extremely rich in natural resources which makes it an important caravan stop.&nbsp; Although it's far away from most other civilization, many people go out of there way to visit the (in)famous Mor's End.&nbsp; Money attracts all sorts people... good and bad...&nbsp; thieves and heroes...&nbsp; men and mice...The Dam idea is interesting...&nbsp; It could be made to work, but I'm not sure it's absolutely necessary considering the hook provided above.I liked your political hook until I got to the Mercenary part...&nbsp; A large standing army would mean a very lawful place... and I think it would make better plot sense if the city is a bit more chaotic.--sam</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Lalato, post: 749629, member: 9171"] I'm not sure about "The Russell"... I'm trying to think of a way to call the "mayor" Administrator or Moderator, but I'm coming up blank. How about Founder instead of Mayor or Russell? One of the obvious hooks is that the city is extremely rich in natural resources which makes it an important caravan stop. Although it's far away from most other civilization, many people go out of there way to visit the (in)famous Mor's End. Money attracts all sorts people... good and bad... thieves and heroes... men and mice... The Dam idea is interesting... It could be made to work, but I'm not sure it's absolutely necessary considering the hook provided above. I liked your political hook until I got to the Mercenary part... A large standing army would mean a very lawful place... and I think it would make better plot sense if the city is a bit more chaotic. --sam [/QUOTE]

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