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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Lalato" data-source="post: 755381" data-attributes="member: 9171">I have no problem with changing the names... I just want to make sure the names refer back to the folks that make ENWorld...As for the grandmother... she can be a sorceress, a priestess, whatever...Hmmm...  that gives me an idea...We could hint at this being tied to the thing that sleeps in the warrens below the city.  Say that thing is extremely powerful, evil, and smart.One day Erek's grandmother is wandering through the hills north of the Lake River, as it was known at the time.  She spots what looks like a cairn.  For some reason she feels drawn to it.  On one side of the cairn she notices a large boulder that could almost pass for a door.  She moves the boulder with her magic, and reveals an entrance and rough hewn stairs leading down...Anyway...  I'm not feeling very creative today, but I'm thinking she finds some item tied to the evil thing.  The item has a very high personality and soon controls her.Auvdor Kost was a powerful wizard that imprisoned the evil thing in the warrens below until he could figure out a way to be rid of it entirely.The item forces her to take control of Erek and his men so that they get information about Auvdor Kost.Erek finally breaks free of the enchantments, throws the item into the lake, and banishes his grandmother.The rest of the story remains the same.  Let me know what you all think.--sam</blockquote>