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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Radiant" data-source="post: 1027804" data-attributes="member: 12018">John takes her hand but doesn't realy use it to get up. He takes down his mask and you can see he is breathing a bit harder but mostly looks as if he is just getting warmed up. "Take down your guard kid, what do you think I will do?"He smiles slightly, looking much like a wolf who just found his prey."Ok, you where a lot better than Shade expected. And well even a bit better than I expected. Those of you who feel tired can leave after I'm though doing the teacher talk. The purpose of this training wasn't reay to get to the door but mostly how you react in a situation then nothing is realy secure. Concrats to you kid, you won which is always good. To you two too, your teamwork was excelent especialy considering you improvised it. Now to the critique..."He opens the door and walks into the controlroom, aknowledging Joey with a nod. He pulls the door to the fridge open and hesitates a second as his hand reached out for a beer, taking a soda instead. Leaving the door open for anyone who might want something he leans on the control panels and continues."First of all there's you kid" He looks at Eris."You won cause the others opened the way for you, otherwise your run through the open ground would have been the end of your try. You should have waited till the first blast hit me before doing that. Most importantly though, Chamber waited for you and you've used that to win over him. Kay you won the mission with that but ask yourself if he's going to do you a favour like that again sometime.To the dark and icky boy. Realy good work, attacks at the right moment and you got forward fast enough. Had she kicked my while I was down you could both have made it out, maybe taken me out completly. But you trusted too much on teamwork, she made her own thing from the start. You should only support others in a fight if you are sure they are with you. You can't afford to let your guard slip for someone who goes solo. It sure helps that one but it will make you end up dead, or just loosing as in this case. Well and there's you cowboy. Keep an eye open what your soroundings are made of, that ground trick would have worked fine in the open. Most importantly though you've got to move more. And if you fight alongside someone else don't get too far behind. Had you been with Chamber here, you could have touched me then Catgirl here struck me down and ended the fight for sure."He sighs and looks at the scenes again on the screen."Ah well, you've been pretty good for the first time."</blockquote>

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