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Message: <blockquote data-quote="daddystabz" data-source="post: 4276968" data-attributes="member: 54231">Here is my first attempt at making a 4e character.  This is Kriv, the Dragonborn Paladin.  Please feel free to post opinions, comments, critiqe, etc! Please also point out any mistakes you might see!Name: KrivLevel/Alignment: Lvl 1 Lawful Good PaladinRace: DragonbornClass: PaladinRole: DefenderDeity: BahamutSize: MediumSpeed: 6 squaresVision: NormalHeight: 6’8”Weight: 315 lbs.Languages: Common, DraconicHPs Gained/Lvl: 6Build Type: Avenging PaladinArmor Proficiencies: Cloth, leather, hide, chainmail,scale, plate; light shield, heavy shieldWeapon Proficiencies: Simple melee, military melee,simple rangedImplements: Holy symbol*Racial Abilities: +2 Str, +2 Cha.  Dragonborn Fury: When you’re bloodied, you gain a +1 racial bonus to attack rolls.  Draconic Heritage: Your Healing Surge value is equal to one-quarter of your max hit points + your Con modifier.  Dragon Breath: You can use Dragon Breath as an encounter power.Ability ScoresStr 18* (+4), Con 12 (+1), Dex 10 (+0), Int 8 (-1) , Wis 12 (+1), Cha 18* (+4)(+2 to Str and Cha from Racial bonuses)DefensesAC: 17 (10+7 from Scale Armor)Fortitude Defense: 14 (10+Str mod)Reflex Defense: 10 (10+Dex mod+shield bonus, if you use one)Will Defense: 14 (10+Cha mod)Hit Points: 27Bloodied: 13Healing Surge HP Healed: 7 (1/4 max HPs + Con mod)Healing Surges/Day: 11SkillsReligion (Int)+4Heal (Wis)+6Intimidate (Cha)+11  (+2 racial)Endurance (Con)+6PrayersEncounter PowersDragon Breath    Dragonborn Racial PowerAs you open your mouth with a roar, the deadly power of your draconic kin blasts forth to engulf your foes.Dragon Breath      Dragonborn Racial PowerEncounter ✦ LightningMinor Action Close blast 3Targets: All creatures in areaAttack: Strength + 2 vs. ReflexHit: 1d6 + Constitution modifier damage.Increase to +4 bonus and 2d6 + Constitution modifierdamage at 11th level, and to +6 bonus and 3d6 +Constitution modifier damage at 21st level.Special: When you create your character, choose Strength,Constitution, or Dexterity as the ability score you usewhen making attack rolls with this power. You also choosethe power’s damage type: acid, cold, fire, lightning, orpoison. These two choices remain throughout your character’slife and do not change the power’s other effects.Channel Divinity: Divine Strength    Paladin FeatureYou petition your deity for the divine strength to lay low yourenemies.Encounter ✦ DivineMinor Action PersonalEffect: Apply your Strength modifier as extra damage onyour next attack this turn.Channel Divinity: Divine Mettle    Paladin FeatureYour unswerving faith in your deity empowers a nearby creatureto resist a debilitating affliction.Encounter ✦ DivineMinor Action Close burst 10Target: One creature in burstEffect: The target makes a saving throw with a bonus equalto your Charisma modifier.Fearsome Smite        Paladin Attack 1When you strike a foe with your weapon, the force of the blowcauses him to shudder and second-guess his tactics.Encounter ✦ Divine, Fear, WeaponStandard Action Melee weaponTarget: One creatureAttack: Charisma vs. ACHit: 2[W] + Charisma modifier damage. Until the end ofyour next turn, the target takes a penalty to attack rollsequal to your Wisdom modifier.At Will PowersDivine Challenge       Paladin FeatureYou boldly confront a nearby enemy, searing it with divine light ifit ignores your challenge.At-Will ✦ Divine, RadiantMinor Action Close burst 5Target: One creature in burstEffect: You mark the target. The target remains marked untilyou use this power against another target, or if you failto engage the target (see below). A creature can be subjectto only one mark at a time. A new mark supersedes amark that was already in place.While a target is marked, it takes a –2 penalty to attackrolls for any attack that doesn’t include you as a target.Also, it takes radiant damage equal to 3 + your Charismamodifier the first time it makes an attack that doesn’t includeyou as a target before the start of your next turn. The damage increases to 6 + your Charisma modifier at 11thlevel, and to 9 + your Charisma modifier at 21st level.On your turn, you must engage the target you challengedor challenge a different target. To engage thetarget, you must either attack it or end your turn adjacentto it. If none of these events occur by the end of your turn,the marked condition ends and you can’t use divine challengeon your next turn.You can use divine challenge once per turn.Special: Even though this ability is called a challenge, itdoesn’t rely on the intelligence or language ability of thetarget. It’s a magical compulsion that affects the creature’sbehavior, regardless of the creature’s nature. You can’t placea divine challenge on a creature that is already affected byyour or another character’s divine challenge.Lay on Hands        Paladin FeatureYour divine touch instantly heals wounds.At-Will (Special) ✦ Divine, HealingSpecial: You can use this power a number of times per dayequal to your Wisdom modifier (minimum 1), but only onceper round.Minor Action Melee touchTarget: One creatureEffect: You spend a healing surge but regain no hit points.Instead, the target regains hit points as if it had spent ahealing surge. You must have at least one healing surgeHoly Strike        Paladin Attack 1You strike an enemy with your weapon, which ignites with holylight.At-Will ✦ Divine, Radiant, WeaponStandard Action Melee weaponTarget: One creatureAttack: Strength vs. ACHit: 1[W] + Strength modifier radiant damage. If youmarked the target, you gain a bonus to the damage rollequal to your Wisdom modifier.Increase damage to 2[W] + Strength modifier at 21st level.Valiant Strike        Paladin Attack 1As you bring your weapon to bear, the odds against you addstrength to your attack.At-Will ✦ Divine,WeaponStandard Action Melee weaponTarget: One creatureAttack: Strength + 1 per enemy adjacent to you vs. ACHit: 1[W] + Strength modifier damage.Increase damage to 2[W] + Strength modifier at 21st level.Daily PowersOn Pain of Death        Paladin Attack 1You invoke a prayer that wracks your foe with terrible pain andcauses further pain whenever he makes an attack.Daily ✦ Divine, ImplementStandard Action Ranged 5Target: One creatureAttack: Charisma vs. WillHit: 3d8 + Charisma modifier damage. Once per round, thetarget takes 1d8 damage after making any attacks on itsturn (save ends).Miss: Half damage. Once per round, the target takes 1d4damage after making any attacks on its turn (save ends)Utility PowersFeatsEnlarged Dragon Breath: Prereqs: Dragonborn, Dragon Breath racial power.  Benefit: When you use your Dragon Breath racial power, you can choose to make it blast 5 instead of blast 3.EquipmentScale  Armor: Armor Bonus + 7, Speed – 1, Weight 45 lb.Greatsword: +3 to attack, 1d10 dmg, Weight: 8lb, Heavy BladeStandard Adventurer’s Kit: Backpack, Bedroll, Flint and Steel, a Belt Pouch, 2 Sunrods, 10 days worth of Trail Rations, 50 ft. of Hempen Rope, a WaterskinLantern: Weight 2 lb.Money: 18 gold--I am still wondering if I should take Toughness as my 1st. lvl feat and take Enlarged Dragon Breath at a later lvl? What do you all think?</blockquote>

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