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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Arkhandus" data-source="post: 4046087" data-attributes="member: 13966">Others have given advice on the major stuff, so I'll just touch on a few minor quibbles for a second.Like, one, you really should rename stuff more drastically to remove its similarity to existing D&D entities or mythological figures, or just change their names back to be identical to their original sources.  Others have already mentioned this of course.You should assign a favored weapon to Amarel, Darut, Magluara, and Laerith.  Even if they don't fight or anything, they should at least have Unarmed Strike listed as a favored weapon.Dispater's favored weapon should be changed to a martial weapon, since he has the War domain.  It sucks bad to have the War domain with a simple weapon, and not even a good one.  Warhammers or light flails or something else maybe, I dunno.Laerith needs two more domains apparently.....ones you might consider include Charm, Community, Madness, Nobility, Plant, or Trickery.  Maybe Charm and Nobility, or Community and Nobility?  These are in Deities & Demigods, at least.</blockquote>