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<blockquote data-quote="Morrus" data-source="post: 7881122" data-attributes="member: 1">This is an early draft of chapter 1 of my novel. The elevator pitch is &quot;Game of Thrones in Space&quot;. I'm under no illusion that I'm any GRR Martin, but it's an exercise in personal fulfillment. (This is also an RPG setting, but that's by-the-by). Anyhow. This is the very first draft. It has not had an editing pass either by myself or an editor (two necessary steps), but I wanted to put it out there just to put a stamp on it and say &quot;I'm doing this!&quot;, even if only to myself. That said, I would super-appreciate any constructive feedback anybody has time to offer. I've already got a mini &quot;setting bible&quot; of terminology, lists of Houses, a map of the Cauldron, and so on, and I have an overall storyline planned out, but I don't want to spoil anything. This chapter is very introductory as we get to meet some of the various groups in the setting.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Morrus, post: 7881122, member: 1"] This is an early draft of chapter 1 of my novel. The elevator pitch is "Game of Thrones in Space". I'm under no illusion that I'm any GRR Martin, but it's an exercise in personal fulfillment. (This is also an RPG setting, but that's by-the-by). Anyhow. This is the very first draft. It has not had an editing pass either by myself or an editor (two necessary steps), but I wanted to put it out there just to put a stamp on it and say "I'm doing this!", even if only to myself. That said, I would super-appreciate any constructive feedback anybody has time to offer. I've already got a mini "setting bible" of terminology, lists of Houses, a map of the Cauldron, and so on, and I have an overall storyline planned out, but I don't want to spoil anything. This chapter is very introductory as we get to meet some of the various groups in the setting. [/QUOTE]

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