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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Walking Dad" data-source="post: 5902546" data-attributes="member: 59043">Review 2:[sblock=Siren]Ondina Naiada AKA Siren - PL 10 (153 pp)Abilities:  22ppSTR    0STA    0 (2)DEX    2 (4)AGI    2 (4)FGT    2INT    0 AWE    1 PRE    4fine, I also forgot your hybrid background. Hybrids have only normal human abilities, so your Str & Sta are just average <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Offenses: Initiative: +4 (4 agi)Melee Attack: +2 (2 fgt)Ranged Attack: +4 (4 dex)Specific Attacks: TK Blast:+8, DC 27 Toughness, Linked Affliction DC 22Psychic Knife: +8 Melee, DC 27 ToughnessfineDefenses: (23pp) Dodge: +11 (7 base + 4 agi)Parry: +11 (9 base + 2 fgt)Toughness: +9 (2 sta + 7 Protection)Fort +7 (2 sta + 5 enhanced)Will +13 (7 base + 1 awe + 5 enhanced)fineSkills: (48 ranks= 24 pp)Acrobatics(+14/10), Deception(+12/8), Perception(+11/10), Persuasion(+16/12), Stealth(+12/8) *+5 to checks where Attractiveness Matters*fineAdvantages: 4Attractive, Benefit(Atlantean Royalty), Favoured Environment(Underwater), Uncanny Dodgefine, but I just wanted to inform you that being aquatic isn't a dominant trait. Half of the hybrids don't favor the water and are not aquaticPowers: Comprehend 2: (animals, speak & understand) Limit: Sea Creature - 1ppfine, but not needed, see advantagesAtlantean Container: [Racial, Innate] (8pp)Immunity 3: High Pressure, Cold Environments, Drowning - 3ppSuper Senses 3: Sonar(Accurate Ultrasonic Hearing) - 3pp(note that you can only accurately pinpoint Ultrasonic sounds, not sound perceivable by normal humans. Also, aquatic heroes (and the NPC Atlanteans) will have low-light vision, not sonar)Swimming 2: 2mph(30/round) -2ppfine, but not needed, see advantagesFeature/quirk: Sense/Be Sensed by other Aquatic Telepaths - 0 ppplease add "and their descendants" after "Telepaths"Psychic Array [Descriptor: Mental] (40 point pool +8 Alternate/Dynamic = 48 pp)Psychic Siren(31+8+1=40) [Descriptor: Sonic]-Siren Song: Affliction 10 (Area Perception(Hearing)+1, Selective+1, Cumulative+1, Limited: Singing -1, Alternate save: Will+0, Insidious) *3/rank+1=31***Affliction: Will save, causes Entranced; Compelled; Controlled**-Cleansing Song: Nullify 7 (Mental Effects, Area Perception(Hearing)+1, Selective+1, Distracting-1, Limited: Singing-1, Precise) *1/rank+1=8*-Enhanced Traits: Advantage: Fascinate *1*Psychic Illusions(40) Alt Effect +1ppwe will see if singing is limiting you in such a way that you can use the power only half the time... if not, I may require a different flaw (distracting would make sense) If this is the case, we may keep it as a complication-Illusion 10 (All Senses, Selective+1, Resistable by will-1, Concentration-1): 4/rank=40**1,000 Cubic feet**TK Blast(38) Alt Effect +1pp-Blast: Damage 12 (Ranged+1, Accuratex2) *Linked:Stunning Force* 2/rank+2=26+12 Linked=38*-Stunning Force Linked: Afffliction 12 (Ranged+1, Instant Recovery-1) - *1/rank=12***Affliction: Fort save, causes Dazed; Prone; Incapacitaed**limited degree would make sense, as one round incapacitated isn't that powerful. Also note that the degrees don't stack (enemies who fail by two degrees are Prone, but not Dazed) Psychic Knife(16) Dynamic +2pp-Damage 12 (Incurable, AccurateX3) Dynamic *1/rank+4=16*you may change the resistance to will as a +0 mod, if you wantMind Reading (20) Dynamic +2pp-Mind Reading 10 (Alternate Save[Dodge=Will]+0, Area Burst+2, Close-2) *2/rank=20*Telepathy(13+7=20) Dynamic +2pp -Communication 2, Mental (Area+1, Selective+1, Subtle 1) *6/rank+1=13*-Enhanced Communication 2 (Area+1, Limited: Familiarity-1, Move Activation) *4/rank-1=7*all fine, but can you please specify "Familiarity" for this power?Atlantean Outfit: (Psychic Armour & Tiara set) [Removable, Noticeable] - (23pp)Protection 7 - 7ppEnhanced Abilities: +2 Sta +2 Dex +2 Agi - 12ppEnhanced Saves: +5 fort/will - 10ppSexy armour: (Enhanced Advantage: Attractive) - 1ppstill not buying noticeable for this. The sample battlesuit characters in all published material haven't the flaw. Nor saw I any other device with it.Complications: Vulnerable to Heat, Motivation- Protecting Atlantis.heat vulnerability is fine, but not required. Below complication is required, if you take the aquatic package:Weakness: Atlanteans dehydrate when away from water for an extended time, becoming impaired, disabled, and finally incapacitated before their condition becomes dying. Immersion in water immediately removes all  cumulated conditions.COST:  22 Abilities + 24 Skills + 4 Advantages + 23 Combat + 80 Powers = 153/153[/sblock]</blockquote>

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