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<blockquote data-quote="El Mahdi" data-source="post: 5600348" data-attributes="member: 59506">Hopefully some constructive criticism.&nbsp;How about:<ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">a step-by-step example of character creation with a sample character fully fleshed out</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">an example of combat (round by round)</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">an itemized list or document detailing the differences between this and basic D20 in specifics (not just general statements like &quot;tweaked x to speed up combat&quot;, etc.)</li>
</ul>I've read over the Character Creation Summery* and I'm still confused about how to make a character.&nbsp; It assumes that the player understands level adjustments and the reasons for them, and already understands the differences between your system and regular D20.&nbsp; I also see that you have different Defenses, though they are still passive (like regular D20), but I'm not sure I completely understand what they are and when they are used.&nbsp; That's where an example of combat would come in very handy.&nbsp;I'd also suggest having someone edit it for spelling and syntax.&nbsp; I've noticed that even in things I've written and edited myself, I need somebeody else to edit it or a lot of spelling and syntax errors get missed.&nbsp;<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp;&nbsp;(*sp* - Summary)</blockquote>

[QUOTE="El Mahdi, post: 5600348, member: 59506"] Hopefully some constructive criticism. How about: [LIST] [*]a step-by-step example of character creation with a sample character fully fleshed out [*]an example of combat (round by round) [*]an itemized list or document detailing the differences between this and basic D20 in specifics (not just general statements like "tweaked x to speed up combat", etc.) [/LIST]I've read over the Character Creation Summery* and I'm still confused about how to make a character. It assumes that the player understands level adjustments and the reasons for them, and already understands the differences between your system and regular D20. I also see that you have different Defenses, though they are still passive (like regular D20), but I'm not sure I completely understand what they are and when they are used. That's where an example of combat would come in very handy. I'd also suggest having someone edit it for spelling and syntax. I've noticed that even in things I've written and edited myself, I need somebeody else to edit it or a lot of spelling and syntax errors get missed. :) (*sp* - Summary) [/QUOTE]

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