Need campaign logo suggestions/critique

[Ferret]

The problem I have with the Dark part is that it just look vague. Not dark or menacing, a bit blury is all.What they did with the sixth sense logo is more what I think you are aiming at.

Of course, I sem to be out numbered and it seem like you like so it really doesn't matter.

 

[shadowlight]

The problem I have with the Dark part is that it just look vague. Not dark or menacing, a bit blury is all.What they did with the sixth sense logo is more what I think you are aiming at.

Of course, I sem to be out numbered and it seem like you like so it really doesn't matter.

Still, I appreciate your feedback! I'm kind of a freak for making campaign logos, so I'll definitely incorporate the comments here into future logos...

 

[shadowlight]

OK, based on the feedback, I took one more stab at this:

I think this is my favorite so far...

Comments?

 

[Ankh-Morpork Guard]

OOooh, definitely like that banner style one. I'd say go with that!

 

[shadowlight]

Thanks!

It's always hard to adjust something you like based on others' feedback, but it's usually for the best