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<blockquote data-quote="MattW" data-source="post: 8286846" data-attributes="member: 7029432"><p>It looks like you're trying for a charismatic general. Alexander the Great, Julius Caesar, Napoleon. That kind of thing. Am I right?</p><p></p><p>Alexander = "Chosen One"</p><p>Julius = "White Raven Tactician"</p><p>Napoleon = "Ballisterius"? with the "Pull of Destiny"</p><p></p><p>I think you may have a valid fear about putting too much into one class. IMHO, the "Steel Protector" seems both unnecessary and inappropriate for a Rogue. Likewise, "Borderland Marshal" seems more like a Ranger than a mighty general and Silverblades or Ardent Souls might be good Paladins....</p><p></p><p>Having said that, I really liked the "Rabble Rouser" as a basis for Robin Hood, or someone like Alfred the Great.</p><p></p><p>In further nitpicking and suggestions... </p><p>1. I'd be tempted to swap around "Veteran Poise" and "Seasoned Instructor" (ie: Seasoned Instructor at level 6 and Veteran Poise at level 11) </p><p>2. The Warlord Presence is a fixed 30 feet radius at every level up to 13 and then - for the White Raven ONLY - it becomes 60 feet. Is that correct? Why not make it scale with Levels for ALL the types? (maybe 5 feet per level?). This would reflect an improving ability to command bigger and bigger units.</p><p>3. Remove "Peerless Insight" at 20th level. Change it to an improved Warlord Presence called something like "Athena's Blessing": a version of Warlord Presence that will affect any ally/subordinate that can SEE the Warlord.</p><p></p><p>Anyway, that's just my 10cents. It looks like a very interesting idea that's taken a lot of work to create.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="MattW, post: 8286846, member: 7029432"] It looks like you're trying for a charismatic general. Alexander the Great, Julius Caesar, Napoleon. That kind of thing. Am I right? Alexander = "Chosen One" Julius = "White Raven Tactician" Napoleon = "Ballisterius"? with the "Pull of Destiny" I think you may have a valid fear about putting too much into one class. IMHO, the "Steel Protector" seems both unnecessary and inappropriate for a Rogue. Likewise, "Borderland Marshal" seems more like a Ranger than a mighty general and Silverblades or Ardent Souls might be good Paladins.... Having said that, I really liked the "Rabble Rouser" as a basis for Robin Hood, or someone like Alfred the Great. In further nitpicking and suggestions... 1. I'd be tempted to swap around "Veteran Poise" and "Seasoned Instructor" (ie: Seasoned Instructor at level 6 and Veteran Poise at level 11) 2. The Warlord Presence is a fixed 30 feet radius at every level up to 13 and then - for the White Raven ONLY - it becomes 60 feet. Is that correct? Why not make it scale with Levels for ALL the types? (maybe 5 feet per level?). This would reflect an improving ability to command bigger and bigger units. 3. Remove "Peerless Insight" at 20th level. Change it to an improved Warlord Presence called something like "Athena's Blessing": a version of Warlord Presence that will affect any ally/subordinate that can SEE the Warlord. Anyway, that's just my 10cents. It looks like a very interesting idea that's taken a lot of work to create. [/QUOTE]
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