Need some help with Igor

[Advand]

Hey I am a new DM looking for some help, I am writing up a section of undead adventure ( level 11-12ish) capped of with a Vampire boss and everything. I am throwing in a section of the Dungeon entitled The Chop Shop, in here i want to have an Igor (of the Diskworld variety for those who have read the books) as well as some fleshy constructs that he has made.
I have run into two problems:
1) what do I use as the base for my Igor, I want him to be a living creature however one that is not quite human or any other race, should i base him on the flesh golem or make my own monster (he should be a controller leader type.)

2) their is only one flesh golem in the MM and its an elite, I want a bit of variety. should I reconfigure some undead (dropping the vulnerability to radiant damage and giving them some fun abilities) or should i just start from the ground up.

thought suggestions? any help is appreciated

 

[Flipguarder]

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Igor Level 11 Elite brute
Medium natural humanoid XP 1,200
Initiative +4 Senses Perception +6; low-light vision
Creepy-ass Aura (psychic) aura 2; enemies that enter or start their
turns in the aura take a -1 to their will defense.
HP 210; Bloodied 105
Regeneration 5
AC 24; Fortitude 24, Refl ex 18, Will 19
Saving Throws +2
Speed 3
Action Points 1

Unreasonably Long Scalpel (standard; at-will)
Reach 2; +14 vs. AC; 1d8 + 7 damage

Unnaturally Quick Hands (standard; at-will)
Igor makes makes two scalpel attacks.

"Thew youeth together!" (standard; encounter)
Close blast 3; +14 vs. Reflex; 1d8 + 6 damage and target is pulled 1 square
Effect: All targets are restrained (save ends) Until all targets save targets that don't save must shift as a free action to remain adjacent to allies that save and subsequently move. If this becomes impossible the target takes an additional 3d8 damage.

"You Rang?"(free; recharge ⚄ ⚅ )
Igor teleports behind a creature of his choice within 10 squares.

Back-up heart (free;when reduced to 0 hit points) ✦ Healing
Igor spends two healing surges and regains 105 hit points. Igor gains a +1 bonus to all defenses until the start of its next turn.

Alignment Unaligned Languages: Common
Skills Stealth +9, Theivery +34
Str 8 (+4) Dex 20 (+10) Wis 12 (+6)

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That's my best try.

 

[Mesh Hong]

This is probably a little over the top but might give you some ideas.

I made him a leader controller as you indicated, but it is hard to know what control and leader powers to give him without knowing the encounter he is being designed for.


Igor Level 11 Elite Controller (Leader)
Medium Natural Humanoid XP 1,200

Initiative +10 Senses Perception +4, low light vision
Air of Evil (fear) aura 1; All enemies inside the aura take a -2 penalty to
attack rolls and saving throws; all allies inside the aura gain a +2 bonus to
saving throws
HP 224; Bloodied 112
Regeneration 10 if Igor takes radiant damage this regeneration does not
function on his next turn
AC 25; Fortitude 24, Reflex 24, Will 22
Resist 10 necrotic, 10 poison; Vulnerable 5 lightning
Saving Throws +2, -4 vs. charm
Speed 6
Action Points 1

Cleaver Strike (Standard; at-will)
Attack +16 vs. AC; 1d8+5 damage

Cleaver Manoeuvre (Standard; at-will)
Igor makes 2 Cleaver Strike attacks; Igor may shift 2 squares after each
attack

Dark Bolts (Standard; at-will) ♦ necrotic
Range 15; 1 or 2 targets; attack +15 vs. Fortitude; 2d6+5 necrotic
damage; on hit slide target 2 squares

Enervate Construct (Standard; recharge )
Range 10; target ally construct takes 15 damage and may immediately
make a free basic attack with a +2 attack bonus and a +4d6 damage
bonus; hit or miss the ally construct grants combat advantage to all
enemies until the end of its next turn

Dark Energy Transference (Standard; at-will) ♦ necrotic, healing
Burst 5; targets 1 enemy and 1 ally; attack +15 vs. Will; 3d6+5 necrotic
damage; on hit 1 ally inside the burst regains 15 HPs

Now I am the Master (Standard; encounter) ♦ necrotic, gaze, charm
Burst 3; enemies only; 1 primary target; attack +25 vs. Will; 2d6+5
necrotic damage; on hit target is dominated (save ends); all other
secondary targets; attack +25 vs. Will; 2d6+5 necrotic damage; on hit
target is dazed (save ends)

Shadow Hop (Move; recharge ) ♦ teleport
Igor teleports up to 5 squares

Alignment Evil Languages common
Skills Acrobatics +15, Arcana +13, Endurance +13, Stealth +15
Str 20 (+10) Dex 21 (+10) Wis 8 (+4)
Con 16 (+8) Int 16 (+8) Cha 16 (+8)
Equipment Wicked looking cleaver, heavily blood stained apron


It was hard to know exactly what you wanted, of course my advice would be to build your own monsters from scratch.

Anyway I hope this helps, or gives you a few ideas.

 

[Advand]

Nice I like the enervate construct and backup heart, Also for further clarification Igor is gonna be on a platform suspended over an acid pool with a few flesh golems on the grounds in front of the pool, I am also gonna work in one or two traps on the main floor. spinning saw blades, lightning machines, ceiling hooks and other fun little toys that one might find in an evil genius's lab.

 

[Mesh Hong]

Nice I like the enervate construct and backup heart, Also for further clarification Igor is gonna be on a platform suspended over an acid pool with a few flesh golems on the grounds in front of the pool, I am also gonna work in one or two traps on the main floor. spinning saw blades, lightning machines, ceiling hooks and other fun little toys that one might find in an evil genius's lab.

Sounds good.

I think my Enervate Construct might be way over the top damage wise as I forgot to account for the creatures own attack damage. The bonus should probably be in the region of 2d8. To still keep it on the nasty side if the leaders troops are all Brutes you could bump the attack bonus to +4 to compensate for their lack of accuracy and still make the power a viable choice.