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Message: <blockquote data-quote="the Jester" data-source="post: 1600647" data-attributes="member: 1210">Hm, the maelstrom is really good.  I'd lower the damage- make the bolts 8d6 and creatures caught in it take 15d6.  I'd also make a note as to what Escape Artist DC you'd have to hit to wriggle free (I say 20 + int/cha bonus).  As is, I'd say it's a 9th level spell, and I understand that you wanna keep it 8th.As to All-Seeing, it's pretty cool.  A couple things you might want to consider, though: first, does it summon eyeballs or animate them?  If the former, the spell should prolly be Conjuration (Summoning), though it might be (Creation).  Second, I think the AC penalty is too bumpy as written.  There's no mechanism for doing damage to AC, and that's essentially what you're talking about doing here (especially since penalties from the same source don't stack).There are a couple of ways I can think of to keep the effect, though. Maybe just make it so that they eyeballs inflict a flat -4 profane penalty to targets that fail their save (who also get half damage).  Alternately, you could have the eyeballs inflict dex damage- prolly on the order of 1d4 per eyeball, again with a single save negating it.  I'd also eliminate the bit about destroying the eyeballs removing the penalties, but I'm a very mean dm. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

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