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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Izod" data-source="post: 270387" data-attributes="member: 3585">a friend of mine and I are working on this spell.  This is what I have come up with so far. please show me where I have made mistakes.BalefireSpellcraft DC:112Components:V,SCasting time:1 ActionRange: LongTarget: 1 living creatureDuration InstantaneousSaving throw: Fort partialSpell restance: YesTo Develope 951,000 GP, 21 days, 39,950xp Seed Slay 25, Transport 27, Factors,increase save DC by 20 dc 40,decrease casting time to 1 action dc 20A stream or black energy streams forth from the casters hand instantly killing the target. If fort save is madethe target takes 3d6+20 dammage.  if the save is failed the subject is pulled from the time stram for 1d4+1 rounds.  Any actions taken by the target in the preceding rounds are instantally negated.ok that's it tell me what ya think.  BTW this is the first epic spell I have crafted <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> so I know there are errors just not sure whereEDITED: added a few words to make my nagging friend happy about the wording</blockquote>