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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Nifft" data-source="post: 2211671" data-attributes="member: 6562">Some suggestions on existing mechanics you could use:1/ Seems fine, if underpowered for 4th level.2/ Nothing wrong with ripping off an existing spell like Scorching Ray, or a Psionic power like Exhalation of the Black Dragon. This spell could give two uses of a breath-ray that deals a fixed 4d6 Cold damage, with a third use of the breath-ray at 11th level and a fourth (and final) use at 15th level.3/ Rip off the Succubus kiss mechanic. If you're grappling, and you win, you can force a critter to kiss. You may discharge all remaining breath-rays at once, they each deal 4d8 instead, and they bypass SR. Why so powerful? Because grappling is dangerous for magi.4/ Glitterdust is a nifty spell. I don't know if this spell should emulate it. I think that emulating sleet storm or fog cloud would be good enough.5/ The "generous" GM and grease -- you should explictily include that. Check out the spell-like abilities of a White Dragon, and you'll see freezing mist. That's a nice effect to duplicate, especially if you have Boots of the Winterlands and they don't.Hmm... interesting spell, I like it, especially for Sorcerers. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> -- N</blockquote>