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Message: <blockquote data-quote="kreynolds" data-source="post: 1459615" data-attributes="member: 2829">Cool spell. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f60e.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":cool:" title="Cool    :cool:"  data-smilie="6"data-shortname=":cool:" /> First of all though, I suggest changing the school to transmutation. I don't think evocation is really appropriate for the effect. Anyway...Let's compare it to Prestidigitation, which can 1) slowly lift 1 pound of material, and can 2) clean items in a 1-foot cube. You can accomplish either of these in one round, but the spell lasts for 1 hour.So, in comparison, while your spell gets the job done much faster, it doesn't really do anything more than Prestidigitation. However, your spell does indeed affect heavier items than Prestidigitation.I think 1st-level is fine, but I would definately suggest that you complete remove the following text from the description..."This burst of energy causes all small objects in the area to immediately move to its proper place, becoming neat and orderly in an instant."...and replace it with..."This burst of energy causes all small objects in the area to be instantly rearranged in a neat and orderly fashion, based upon their type (glasses and silverware would go to one place, quills and inks would be grouped together beside stacks of paper, etc)."The only reason I suggest this is because I could see a "difficult" gamer arguing that this portion of the text, "...causes all small objects in the area to immediately move to its proper place...", means that if you were faced with a puzzle that involved moving pieces around on a board, for example, then the "proper place" for the pieces would be the solution, thus the spell would provide the solution, and I think that goes far beyond the intent.</blockquote>

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