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I think this is some really cool stuff. It gives me a sense of the demon princes as more than just really big demons, and suggests some excellent ideas for NPC villain groups. I'd love to see more like this.
Edit: After some more thought, I agree with the consensus on the WotC thread: The Demogorgon and Baphomet cults are excellent, the Graz'zt one has potential but needs some work. In particular, I'd like to know what differentiates Graz'ztian cults from the worship of any deity of fertility and/or physical pleasures. The pursuit of sensual pleasure is not in itself evil, and the Graz'zt cult sounds more hedonistic than malevolent. Let's see some more about that nihilism and its consequences.
I think this is some really cool stuff. It gives me a sense of the demon princes as more than just really big demons, and suggests some excellent ideas for NPC villain groups. I'd love to see more like this.
Edit: After some more thought, I agree with the consensus on the WotC thread: The Demogorgon and Baphomet cults are excellent, the Graz'zt one has potential but needs some work. In particular, I'd like to know what differentiates Graz'ztian cults from the worship of any deity of fertility and/or physical pleasures. The pursuit of sensual pleasure is not in itself evil, and the Graz'zt cult sounds more hedonistic than malevolent. Let's see some more about that nihilism and its consequences.
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