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Message: <blockquote data-quote="HolyMan" data-source="post: 5454626" data-attributes="member: 84167">Character go over...Name: Gareth SilanderAlignment: Neutral GoodClass: FighterRace: HumanAge: 16Gender: Male[sblock=-Appearance-]Sporting vibrant red hair and green eyes, the former being perpetually  in a state of bed-head, Gareth looks younger than he is – An impression  only further reinforced by his five-foot-four height and lean build, as  well as his spirited, almost childish disposition. Even though he seems  like he shouldn't be serving as a soldier, paying close attention would  reveal things such as callous and the occasional faded scars on his  hands – Minute, easily missed details that show Gareth to be as  qualified as the other drafted soldiers.[/sblock]I like the red hair and green eyes I am about to make that the typical look of all Peshman. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f61b.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":p" title="Stick out tongue    :p"  data-smilie="7"data-shortname=":p" />[sblock=-Background-]Born and raised on a farm as the second child of four, Gareth's life was  a simple one – So long as he and his siblings took care of their share  of the work, they were allowed to run around as they pleased for the  most part. Although it was safe from most major dangers, a small forest  on the edge of their property did pose some danger thanks to the  creatures that lurked inside it. Because of this, the siblings were all  taught how to defend themselves – Though they lacked proper weapons to  do so with, instead using what suitable tools they had around as  substitutes. Despite the occasional encounter with a wolf or some other  creature from the forest attempting to snatch some of the livestock,  their lives were peaceful and enjoyable.  When Gareth reached the age of adulthood, like many others during times  such as this, he was drafted and sent out for basic training. The youth  performed admirably, quickly picking up the nuances of proper footwork  and reading ones opponent. However, while he was skilled with a shield,  none of the weapons the trainers tried to get him to use seemed to work  out. He was horrendous with the Sword or Axe, though the Spear felt a  bit closer to home. It wasn't until they gave up on trying the regular  weapons and dug up some of the uncommon ones that he found something  that worked – A Trident.  The Trident was remarkably similar to the pitchforks he had often used  back home, in chores and often being the tool of choice for driving off  any beasts from the forest. Although it was a bit old and worn from  neglect, having sat along with the other rarely used weapons in the  armory for some time, Gareth found it to be his perfect weapon of  choice. The trouble he had been having with practice sessions now  resolved, since he now had a weapon he could use skillfully, he managed  to go from a “clumsy” recruit to one of their above-average ones.   [/sblock]Great background we can add to it as we play.-Stats-Level: 1Current XP: 0Level Up At: 1,000HP: 10 + 3 = 13 (Base + Mod) Here could you reverse the numbers as I need the totals more than the modifiers. AC: 10 + 4 + 2 + 2 + 0 = 18 (Base + Arm + Shield + Dex + DB)Touch: 10 + 2 + 0 = 12 (Base + Dex + DB)Flat-Footed: 10 + 4 + 2 = 16 (Base + Arm + Shield) And for AC also, thanksDB: +0 (½ BAB)Initiative: +2 (Dex)Speed: 20 (Armor), 30 (Base)BAB: +1Melee: 1 + 3 = +4 (BAB + Str)Ranged: 1 + 2 = +3 (BAB + Dex)Spell Resistance: 0Damage Resistance: 0[code][B]-Ability Scores-[/B]Str: [B]16[/B] (+3)[10p]Dex: [B]14[/B] (+2)[06p]Con: [B]16[/B] (+3)[10p]Int: [B]10[/B] (+0)[02p] Wis: [B]10[/B] (+0)[02p]Cha: [B]13[/B] (+1)[05p][B]-Saves-[/B]Fort: 3 + 2 = [B]+5[/B] (Mod + Class Base Save)Ref:  2 + 0 = [B]+2[/B] (Mod + Class Base Save)Will: 0 + 0 = [B]+0[/B] (Mod + Class Base Save)[/code]-Weapon- (Attack – Damage – Critical – Type – Misc)Trident: +4 – 1d8 – x2 – Piercing – 10ft Range Weapon Focus missing Heavy Steel Shield: +4 – 1d4 – x2 – Bludgeoning – N/A same-Armor- (AC – ACP – Speed – Weight)Scale Mail: +4 – -4 – 20ft – 30lbsHeavy Steel Shield: +2 – -2 – N/A – 15lbs-Languages- Common[sblock=-House Rule Changes-] Fighter Proficiencies are only Trident Proficiency & Shield Proficiency. Fighter Armor Proficiency for Heavy Armor is removed, Extra Feat instead.[/sblock]Here you should maybe say: Fighter proficiencies - swap prof w/ all martial weapons for Martial Weapon Prof(trident) and Weapon Focus(trident)Swap Heavy Armor Prof for ??? don't see the extra feat? -Feats-[sblock=House Changes]House Change: Weapon Proficiency (Trident) – No Penalty. House Change: Shield Proficiency – No Penalty. House Change: Armor Proficiency (Medium) – No Penalty.[/sblock]Should have light armor prof also. and instead of no penalty under shields maybe list - no change. Level 1: Power Attack – Add Penalty/Bonus to Attack/Damage Rolls up to BAB until next turn.Human Bonus: Improved Shield Bash – Retain Shield AC Bonus When Shield Bashing.Fighter Bonus: Weapon Focus (Trident) – +1 to Attack Rolls using Trident.House Extra: Weapon Focus (Shield) – +1 to Attack Rolls using Shield. Free +2/+2: Athletic – +2 to Jump/Swim Skills.Missing one??-Skills-Skill Points: 20 (4[Base 2 + House 2] + 0 [Int Mod] * 4 + 4 [Racial Bonus])Max Ranks: 4 Class, 2 Cross.ACP: -6 (list that here, and add to skills) [code]-Skill List- (Rank – Mod – Feat – Misc – Total)Class:[B]Climb[/B] (Str) 4 + 3 + 0 + 0 = [COLOR=Red][B]7[/B][/COLOR][B]Jump[/B] (Str) 4 + 3 + 2 + 0 = [COLOR=Red][B]9[/B][/COLOR][B]Swim[/B] (Str) 4 + 3 + 2 + 0 = [COLOR=Red][B]9[/B][/COLOR]Cross:[B]Balance[/B] (Dex) 2 + 2 + 0 + 0 = [COLOR=Red][B]4[/B][/COLOR][B]Bluff[/B] (Cha) 2 + 1 + 0 + 0 =[B] 3[/B][/code][sblock=-Inventory-]-Equipment- (Cost – Weight)Trident: 15gp – 4lbs Scale Mail: 50gp – 30lbsHeavy Steel Shield: 20gp – 15lbs-Items- (Cost – Weight)Travelers clothes: 1gp – 5lbs cost non weight noneBackpack: 2gp – 2lbsBedroll: 1sp – 5lbsWaterskin: 1gp – 4lbBelt Pouch: 1gp – 1/2lb Hooded Lantern: 7gp – 2lbsFlint & Steel: 1gp – N/A1-Pint Oil Flask: 1sp – 1lb[/sblock]-Misc-Total Weight: 68.5lbs 63.5lbs clothes weigh nothing if you are wearing themMax Weight: 76 / 77 – 153 / 154 – 230Money: 51 Gold, 8 Silver.</blockquote>

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