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<blockquote data-quote="HolyMan" data-source="post: 4859190" data-attributes="member: 84167">welcome aboard Galphanorehere are a few things I found in your character sheet that need a little corrections need marked in red&nbsp;[code]Name: Damon Valnor&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Age: 26Class: Druidic Avenger&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Height: 6'4&quot;Race:&nbsp; Human&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Eyes: GrayGender: M&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Hair: RedAlignment: CN&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Skin: TannedDeity: none&nbsp;Str: 16 +3 (10p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Level: 1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; XP: 0Dex: 16 +2 (10p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; BAB: +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; HP: 10 (1d8+2)Con: 14 +2 (06p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Grapple: +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Dmg Red: 0/0Int: 10 +0 (02p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Speed: 40' [COLOR=red](30')[/COLOR]&nbsp; Spell Res: 0Wis: 14 +2 (06p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Init: +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Spell Save: n/a[COLOR=red]12+sp lvl[/COLOR]Cha: 9&nbsp; +0 [COLOR=red](-1)[/COLOR](01p.)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; ACP: -3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Spell Fail: n/a&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Base&nbsp;&nbsp; Armor&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Shld&nbsp; &nbsp; Dex&nbsp; &nbsp; DB&nbsp; &nbsp; Nat&nbsp;&nbsp; Misc TotalArmor:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 10&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; 16Touch: 12&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Flatfooted: 16&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Base&nbsp;&nbsp; Mod&nbsp;&nbsp; Misc&nbsp;&nbsp; TotalFort:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +4Ref:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +2Will:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +4&nbsp;Weapon&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Attack&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Damage&nbsp; &nbsp; Critical&nbsp;&nbsp; RangeShortspear&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d6+3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x2Shortspear(Thrown)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d6+3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x2&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20'Spear&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d8+4&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x3Spear (Thrown)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d8+3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20'[COLOR=red]Club (melee)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d6+4&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x2&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]Club(thrown)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d6+3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x2&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 10'&nbsp;&nbsp; [/COLOR]Club, Shillelagh&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2d5+5[COLOR=red](1d8+5)[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20/x2[COLOR=red]Club, Shillelagh(thrown)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d8+4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 20/x2&nbsp; &nbsp; 10'[/COLOR]&nbsp;&nbsp;Languages: Common, Druidic&nbsp;Feats: Self-Sufficient,&nbsp; Track,&nbsp; Run,&nbsp; Endurance[COLOR=red]You may swap endurance for nature sense but[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]you have them both listed and the +2's in your skills?[/COLOR]&nbsp;Class Abilities :&nbsp; Rage 1/day, Fast Movement, Nature Sense, &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Wild Empathy (-4 Penalty)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [COLOR=red]Please list armor and wepon prof or link[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Druid/Druid Avenger here to find class abilities[/COLOR]&nbsp;Skill Points: 28&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Max Ranks: 4/2Skills&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Ranks&nbsp; &nbsp; Mod&nbsp; &nbsp; Misc&nbsp; &nbsp; TotalConcentration&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +6Intimidate&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; -1 [COLOR=red](-1 under Mod)[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3Knowledge (Nature)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +6Listen&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [COLOR=red]+0[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +6Spot&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +[COLOR=red]0[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +6Survival&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +10Craft (Weaponsmithing)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4[COLOR=red]Heal&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]You may take the -2/metal +2/wooden but should list seperate[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]Craft(W.S.-metal)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; -2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp;&nbsp; like that :)[/COLOR]&nbsp;Equipment:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Cost&nbsp;&nbsp; WeightHide&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 15 gp&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 25 lbSpear x 3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 6 gp&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 18 lbShortspear x 3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 9 lbClub&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3 lbBackpack&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2 lbBedroll&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1 sp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 5 lbWaterskin&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4 lbBeltpouch&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [COLOR=red](cost 1gp)[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; .5 lb&nbsp; Signet ring&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 5 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0 lbExplorer’s Outfit&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [COLOR=red]0 gp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0 lb[/COLOR]&nbsp;Total Weight: 64 lb&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Money: 18gp 35sp 40cp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [COLOR=red]have you at&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 16gp&nbsp; 9sp[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]if you made a craft roll please post it[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Lgt&nbsp; &nbsp; Med&nbsp; Hvy&nbsp;&nbsp; Lift[COLOR=red]O.H./O.G.[/COLOR]PushMax Weight:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 76&nbsp; &nbsp; 153&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 230&nbsp; &nbsp; 230[COLOR=red]/460[/COLOR]&nbsp; &nbsp; 460&nbsp;[COLOR=red]Please list the Spells per day only [/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]post memorized spells in with your first character post in the IC[/COLOR][COLOR=#ff0000]incase you cgange mind after reading through posts[/COLOR]Memorized Spells:Level 0 (3 Spells)&nbsp;Create Water&nbsp;Create Water&nbsp;Know DirectionLevel 1 (2 Spells)&nbsp;Shillelagh&nbsp;Goodberry[/code]&nbsp;OK think that is it will go back over it before your first mission.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="HolyMan, post: 4859190, member: 84167"] [b]welcome aboard Galphanore[/b] here are a few things I found in your character sheet that need a little [COLOR=red]corrections need marked in red[/COLOR] [code]Name: Damon Valnor Age: 26 Class: Druidic Avenger Height: 6'4" Race: Human Eyes: Gray Gender: M Hair: Red Alignment: CN Skin: Tanned Deity: none Str: 16 +3 (10p.) Level: 1 XP: 0 Dex: 16 +2 (10p.) BAB: +0 HP: 10 (1d8+2) Con: 14 +2 (06p.) Grapple: +3 Dmg Red: 0/0 Int: 10 +0 (02p.) Speed: 40' [COLOR=red](30')[/COLOR] Spell Res: 0 Wis: 14 +2 (06p.) Init: +3 Spell Save: n/a[COLOR=red]12+sp lvl[/COLOR] Cha: 9 +0 [COLOR=red](-1)[/COLOR](01p.) ACP: -3 Spell Fail: n/a Base Armor Shld Dex DB Nat Misc Total Armor: 10 +3 +0 +3 +0 +0 +0 16 Touch: 12 Flatfooted: 16 Base Mod Misc Total Fort: 2 +2 0 +4 Ref: 0 +3 0 +2 Will: 2 +2 0 +4 Weapon Attack Damage Critical Range Shortspear +3 1d6+3 20/x2 Shortspear(Thrown) +3 1d6+3 20/x2 20' Spear +3 1d8+4 20/x3 Spear (Thrown) +3 1d8+3 20/x3 20' [COLOR=red]Club (melee) +3 1d6+4 20/x2 [/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]Club(thrown) +3 1d6+3 20/x2 10' [/COLOR] Club, Shillelagh +4 2d5+5[COLOR=red](1d8+5)[/COLOR] 20/x2 [COLOR=red]Club, Shillelagh(thrown) +4 1d8+4 20/x2 10'[/COLOR] Languages: Common, Druidic Feats: Self-Sufficient, Track, Run, Endurance [COLOR=red]You may swap endurance for nature sense but[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]you have them both listed and the +2's in your skills?[/COLOR] Class Abilities : Rage 1/day, Fast Movement, Nature Sense, Wild Empathy (-4 Penalty) [COLOR=red]Please list armor and wepon prof or link[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000] Druid/Druid Avenger here to find class abilities[/COLOR] Skill Points: 28 Max Ranks: 4/2 Skills Ranks Mod Misc Total Concentration 4 +2 +0 +6 Intimidate 4 +0 -1 [COLOR=red](-1 under Mod)[/COLOR] +3 Knowledge (Nature) 4 +0 +2 +6 Listen 4 +2 [COLOR=red]+0[/COLOR] +6 Spot 4 +2 +[COLOR=red]0[/COLOR] +6 Survival 4 +2 +4 +10 Craft (Weaponsmithing) 4 +0 +0 +4 [COLOR=red]Heal 0 +2 +2 +4[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]You may take the -2/metal +2/wooden but should list seperate[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]Craft(W.S.-metal) 4 +0 -2 +2 like that :)[/COLOR] Equipment: Cost Weight Hide 15 gp 25 lb Spear x 3 6 gp 18 lb Shortspear x 3 3 gp 9 lb Club 0 gp 3 lb Backpack 2 gp 2 lb Bedroll 1 sp 5 lb Waterskin 1 gp 4 lb Beltpouch [COLOR=red](cost 1gp)[/COLOR] 2 gp .5 lb Signet ring 5 gp 0 lb Explorer’s Outfit [COLOR=red]0 gp 0 lb[/COLOR] Total Weight: 64 lb Money: 18gp 35sp 40cp [COLOR=red]have you at 16gp 9sp[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]if you made a craft roll please post it[/COLOR] Lgt Med Hvy Lift[COLOR=red]O.H./O.G.[/COLOR]Push Max Weight: 76 153 230 230[COLOR=red]/460[/COLOR] 460 [COLOR=red]Please list the Spells per day only [/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]post memorized spells in with your first character post in the IC[/COLOR] [COLOR=#ff0000]incase you cgange mind after reading through posts[/COLOR] Memorized Spells: Level 0 (3 Spells) Create Water Create Water Know Direction Level 1 (2 Spells) Shillelagh Goodberry[/code] OK think that is it will go back over it before your first mission. [/QUOTE]

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