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<blockquote data-quote="Old Fezziwig" data-source="post: 665608" data-attributes="member: 59">Hi, Douane.&nbsp; Nice to see the Rgr.&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp; A few things:(1)&nbsp; Don't forget that you have Track and need to select a favored enemy.&nbsp; I'd like to know the favored enemy, only so it can actually come into play at some point (if it doesn't already).(2)&nbsp; As for the feat, I'd say run with Skill Focus (Wilderness Lore) instead, if that ability is what you want — you can use it for the same thing more or less, and the DC to identify natural hazards is only 15, which with a total bonus of +8 should be approachable most all of the time.(3) I like the story and the background more or less works for me.&nbsp; Some thoughts — is he from beyond the Ice Seas or if he's from the Broken Lands?&nbsp; I'm not sure which you're intending (although I suspect the Broken Lands based on the story).&nbsp; It should also be noted that the hobgoblin tribes inhabit the Chasm pretty much exclusively — so, if your hobgoblin is from somewhere else, how does he relate to the hobgoblins of the Chasm?&nbsp; It's fairly important.&nbsp; The other question is, how long ago did the story take place?&nbsp; Is this in the ancient past of the Kozat family or is it recent?&nbsp; The Broken Lands have been bare of most all civilization since the end of the Fourth Pelorian Crusade (the final attempt to reclaim the hill dwarf lands from the dread forces currently occupying that area).&nbsp; Another thought — I'm not trying to make you switch, but if you wanted to keep the story without worrying about answering any of the above questions, that background would work perfectly for a hill dwarf, IMO.&nbsp; Either way works — we can hash it out for the hobgoblin, I've no problem with that (want to make that clear).Again with the list...(1) Ftr/Bbn/Rgr/Pal — Douane (Carrach Kozat, Hobgoblin Rgr1)(2) Sor/Wiz — Ascending Crane (Hu'ka Gnishrak, Canis Sor1)(3) Clr — Dog Faced God(4) Rog — GWolf (Gnome)(5) Wildcard 1 — Jalon Odessa (Liandra Ilvarya, Elf Brd1)(6) Wildcard 2 — rangerjohn (Hobgoblin Pal of Heironeous)[Also the 2 alternate slots are available]thanks,tKL</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Old Fezziwig, post: 665608, member: 59"] Hi, Douane. Nice to see the Rgr. :) A few things: (1) Don't forget that you have Track and need to select a favored enemy. I'd like to know the favored enemy, only so it can actually come into play at some point (if it doesn't already). (2) As for the feat, I'd say run with Skill Focus (Wilderness Lore) instead, if that ability is what you want — you can use it for the same thing more or less, and the DC to identify natural hazards is only 15, which with a total bonus of +8 should be approachable most all of the time. (3) I like the story and the background more or less works for me. Some thoughts — is he from beyond the Ice Seas or if he's from the Broken Lands? I'm not sure which you're intending (although I suspect the Broken Lands based on the story). It should also be noted that the hobgoblin tribes inhabit the Chasm pretty much exclusively — so, if your hobgoblin is from somewhere else, how does he relate to the hobgoblins of the Chasm? It's fairly important. The other question is, how long ago did the story take place? Is this in the ancient past of the Kozat family or is it recent? The Broken Lands have been bare of most all civilization since the end of the Fourth Pelorian Crusade (the final attempt to reclaim the hill dwarf lands from the dread forces currently occupying that area). Another thought — I'm not trying to make you switch, but if you wanted to keep the story without worrying about answering any of the above questions, that background would work perfectly for a hill dwarf, IMO. Either way works — we can hash it out for the hobgoblin, I've no problem with that (want to make that clear). Again with the list... (1) Ftr/Bbn/Rgr/Pal — Douane (Carrach Kozat, Hobgoblin Rgr1) (2) Sor/Wiz — Ascending Crane (Hu'ka Gnishrak, Canis Sor1) (3) Clr — Dog Faced God (4) Rog — GWolf (Gnome) (5) Wildcard 1 — Jalon Odessa (Liandra Ilvarya, Elf Brd1) (6) Wildcard 2 — rangerjohn (Hobgoblin Pal of Heironeous) [Also the 2 alternate slots are available] thanks, tKL [/QUOTE]

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