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<blockquote data-quote="Vendetta" data-source="post: 1729703" data-attributes="member: 14961">There was more fighting, especially on the Ark and when it launched from Cybertron.&nbsp; As the door to the Ark closed, Prime was going to see Elita One shot and Jackknife and Ironhide were going to have to hold him back.&nbsp; Several unknown Autobots were going to die in the Autobot Senate room at the hands of Megatron, to help show his viciousness.&nbsp; As well, there was going to be an atmospheric chase by Thrust, Skywarp, Thundercracker, and Ramjet trying to shoot the Ark down, with Autobots manning guns and shooting back.&nbsp; There would also have been more cameo appearances by the Autobots in the fight inside the Ark.&nbsp; &nbsp; Once on Earth, Spike and Sparkplug would have gone through a discussion with Teletran 1 as it explained to them how to revive Ratchet and trying to get the humans to trust it.&nbsp; I actually LIKED how I ended that part with T-1 just introducing itself and letting it all just go.&nbsp; So that worked out better.&nbsp; I was also going to have the deep sea expidition discover the Decepticons, which I regret not even writing because it would have been very dark and ominous.&nbsp; But by the time of night I was tired and already cutting out stuff because the whole thing was just too long.&nbsp; There would have been a couple more appearances by each of the characters, but I'm glad I limited it as I wanted to include them in the story (to make your characters just as much a part of the whole thing as any other Autobot AND show a reason why Ratchet and Wheeljax chose you guys to reactivate first) but I also didn't like taking liberties with your characters without having seen their personalities in action... so I tried to keep their thoughts and words to a minimum.Anyway... that's about it and it probably would have doubled in length.&nbsp; I short-cutted some of the descriptive phrases to try to cut in to the significant details.&nbsp; So a part of me worried that it wasn't going to be a good read.&nbsp; I'm guessing that it was good enough.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Vendetta, post: 1729703, member: 14961"] There was more fighting, especially on the Ark and when it launched from Cybertron. As the door to the Ark closed, Prime was going to see Elita One shot and Jackknife and Ironhide were going to have to hold him back. Several unknown Autobots were going to die in the Autobot Senate room at the hands of Megatron, to help show his viciousness. As well, there was going to be an atmospheric chase by Thrust, Skywarp, Thundercracker, and Ramjet trying to shoot the Ark down, with Autobots manning guns and shooting back. There would also have been more cameo appearances by the Autobots in the fight inside the Ark. Once on Earth, Spike and Sparkplug would have gone through a discussion with Teletran 1 as it explained to them how to revive Ratchet and trying to get the humans to trust it. I actually LIKED how I ended that part with T-1 just introducing itself and letting it all just go. So that worked out better. I was also going to have the deep sea expidition discover the Decepticons, which I regret not even writing because it would have been very dark and ominous. But by the time of night I was tired and already cutting out stuff because the whole thing was just too long. There would have been a couple more appearances by each of the characters, but I'm glad I limited it as I wanted to include them in the story (to make your characters just as much a part of the whole thing as any other Autobot AND show a reason why Ratchet and Wheeljax chose you guys to reactivate first) but I also didn't like taking liberties with your characters without having seen their personalities in action... so I tried to keep their thoughts and words to a minimum. Anyway... that's about it and it probably would have doubled in length. I short-cutted some of the descriptive phrases to try to cut in to the significant details. So a part of me worried that it wasn't going to be a good read. I'm guessing that it was good enough. [/QUOTE]

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