I found this surprisingly choppy and hard to follow. Jumping from multiple (coinciding) story lines normally isn't a problem for me, but each different scene just looks like colored haze on a gray background. Stone walls combined with the magic flame in Roy's story, the "flashback" haze in Durkmom's story, whatever floaty stuff Durkon is trapped in, and Vampire Durkon's bubble are all extremely similar to me. Did anyone else have this problem?