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<blockquote data-quote="IamTheTest" data-source="post: 3206382" data-attributes="member: 25399"><p>Critique please.</p><p>[sblock=My PC][code]Detlev Zecklin</p><p>Male Human Crusader 1/Paladin 4/ Bone Knight 4/ Ruby Knight Vindicator 1</p><p>LG Medium Humanoid</p><p>Init +4;Senses Listen, Spot</p><p>Aura Courage (10 ft., allies +4 vs fear)</p><p>Languages Common, Draconic, empathic link</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>AC 22, touch 12, flat-footed 22</p><p>hp 90 (10 HD); DR 3/bludgeoning</p><p>Immune disease, fear, nonlethal damage, stunning, detect thoughts, discern lies, and any attempt to magically discern alignment</p><p>Fort +15, Ref +9, Will +9</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Speed 20 ft. (4 squares) in +2 bonecraft full plate; base 30 ft.</p><p>Melee holy ghost touch heavy flail +18/+13 melee (1d10+4/19-20/x2 +2d6 vs evil)</p><p>Ranged mwk heavy crossbow +10/+5 ranged (1d10/19-20/x2)</p><p>Base Atk +9; Grp +13</p><p>Atk Options furious counterstrike, steely resolve 5</p><p>Special Actions Rebuke Undead, Stances, Manuevers</p><p>Paladin Spells Prepared (CL 4th)</p><p>1st-Divine Favorx2</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Maneuvers and Stances Known (IL 1st):</p><p>Stances- Iron Guard's Glare, Martial Spirit</p><p>Strikes- Vanguard Strike, Stone Bones, Douse the Flames, Leading the Attack, Charging Minotaur</p><p>Disciplines: Devoted Spirit; Stone Dragon; White Raven</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Abilities Str 18, Dex 10, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 15, Cha 20</p><p>SQ bone march, lay on hands (40 pts.), master of the white banner, share spells, summon skeletal steed</p><p>Feats Power Attack, Cleave, Weapon Focus (heavy flail), Improved Initiative, Lightning Reflexes</p><p>Skills Craft(armor) +6, Craft(weapon) +6, Hide +4 (-1 in armor), Intimidate +5 (+9 in armor), Knowledge(arcana) +6, Knowledge(religion) +8, Ride +8 (+3 in armor)</p><p>Possessions +2 bonecraft full plate, holy ghost touch heavy flail, mwk heavy crossbow with 10 silver bolts and 20 bolts, gauntlets of ogre power, cloak of charisma +1, ring of sustenence, ring of mind shield, amulet of natural armor +2, heward's handy haversack, pouch containing 112 gp</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Bone March (Su) As a standard action, Detlev can assume control of up to 24 HD of animated undead from a willing caster, provided the caster and the undead are within 60 feet of him. He cannot control any individual undead creature with 4 or more HD.</p><p></p><p>Lay on Hands (Su) Detlev's lay on hands ability heals undead as well as living creatures.</p><p></p><p>Master of the White Banner (Su) Undead under Detlev's control and that are within 60 feet of him gain +3 turn resistance.</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Hook "Disciplined in life, disciplined in death."</p><p></p><p>Detlev's Skeletal Steed</p><p>Heavy Warhorse skeleton</p><p>N Large undead</p><p>Init +6;Senses Listen +0, Spot +0</p><p>Aura Courage (10 ft., allies +4 vs fear)</p><p>Languages empathic link</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>AC 19, touch 11, flat-footed 17</p><p>hp 52 (8 HD); DR 5/bludgeoning</p><p>Immune undead immunities, cold</p><p>Resist improved evasion</p><p>Fort +10, Ref +5, Will +6</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Speed 60 ft. (12 squares)</p><p>Melee 2 Hooves +8 melee (1d6+5) and bite +3 melee (1d4+2)</p><p>Base Atk +4; Grp +13</p><p>-----------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>AbilitiesStr 20, Dex 15, Con --, Int --, Wis 10, Cha 1</p><p>SQ +3 turn resistance within 60 ft of Detlev (cannot be turned while serving as mount), undead traits.</p><p></p><p>Feats Improved Initiative</p><p>[/code]</p><p>[/sblock]</p><p>rolls <a href="http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751705" target="_blank">http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751705</a></p><p><a href="http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751818" target="_blank">http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751818</a></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="IamTheTest, post: 3206382, member: 25399"] Critique please. [sblock=My PC][code]Detlev Zecklin Male Human Crusader 1/Paladin 4/ Bone Knight 4/ Ruby Knight Vindicator 1 LG Medium Humanoid Init +4;Senses Listen, Spot Aura Courage (10 ft., allies +4 vs fear) Languages Common, Draconic, empathic link ----------------------------------------------------------------- AC 22, touch 12, flat-footed 22 hp 90 (10 HD); DR 3/bludgeoning Immune disease, fear, nonlethal damage, stunning, detect thoughts, discern lies, and any attempt to magically discern alignment Fort +15, Ref +9, Will +9 ----------------------------------------------------------------- Speed 20 ft. (4 squares) in +2 bonecraft full plate; base 30 ft. Melee holy ghost touch heavy flail +18/+13 melee (1d10+4/19-20/x2 +2d6 vs evil) Ranged mwk heavy crossbow +10/+5 ranged (1d10/19-20/x2) Base Atk +9; Grp +13 Atk Options furious counterstrike, steely resolve 5 Special Actions Rebuke Undead, Stances, Manuevers Paladin Spells Prepared (CL 4th) 1st-Divine Favorx2 ----------------------------------------------------------------- Maneuvers and Stances Known (IL 1st): Stances- Iron Guard's Glare, Martial Spirit Strikes- Vanguard Strike, Stone Bones, Douse the Flames, Leading the Attack, Charging Minotaur Disciplines: Devoted Spirit; Stone Dragon; White Raven ----------------------------------------------------------------- Abilities Str 18, Dex 10, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 15, Cha 20 SQ bone march, lay on hands (40 pts.), master of the white banner, share spells, summon skeletal steed Feats Power Attack, Cleave, Weapon Focus (heavy flail), Improved Initiative, Lightning Reflexes Skills Craft(armor) +6, Craft(weapon) +6, Hide +4 (-1 in armor), Intimidate +5 (+9 in armor), Knowledge(arcana) +6, Knowledge(religion) +8, Ride +8 (+3 in armor) Possessions +2 bonecraft full plate, holy ghost touch heavy flail, mwk heavy crossbow with 10 silver bolts and 20 bolts, gauntlets of ogre power, cloak of charisma +1, ring of sustenence, ring of mind shield, amulet of natural armor +2, heward's handy haversack, pouch containing 112 gp ----------------------------------------------------------------- Bone March (Su) As a standard action, Detlev can assume control of up to 24 HD of animated undead from a willing caster, provided the caster and the undead are within 60 feet of him. He cannot control any individual undead creature with 4 or more HD. Lay on Hands (Su) Detlev's lay on hands ability heals undead as well as living creatures. Master of the White Banner (Su) Undead under Detlev's control and that are within 60 feet of him gain +3 turn resistance. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Hook "Disciplined in life, disciplined in death." Detlev's Skeletal Steed Heavy Warhorse skeleton N Large undead Init +6;Senses Listen +0, Spot +0 Aura Courage (10 ft., allies +4 vs fear) Languages empathic link ----------------------------------------------------------------- AC 19, touch 11, flat-footed 17 hp 52 (8 HD); DR 5/bludgeoning Immune undead immunities, cold Resist improved evasion Fort +10, Ref +5, Will +6 ----------------------------------------------------------------- Speed 60 ft. (12 squares) Melee 2 Hooves +8 melee (1d6+5) and bite +3 melee (1d4+2) Base Atk +4; Grp +13 ----------------------------------------------------------------- AbilitiesStr 20, Dex 15, Con --, Int --, Wis 10, Cha 1 SQ +3 turn resistance within 60 ft of Detlev (cannot be turned while serving as mount), undead traits. Feats Improved Initiative [/code] [/sblock] rolls [url]http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751705[/url] [url]http://invisiblecastle.com/find.py?id=751818[/url] [/QUOTE]
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