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<blockquote data-quote="Faren" data-source="post: 5105557" data-attributes="member: 64953">feedback!Hey PH,It's a fun read, and usually the letters bring out a nice element. But yeah, at other times, it's difficult to follow. I usually skim through the letters until I reach your summary, then go back and read through them. Both the journals and summaries are pretty well written, and you seem like a creative and talented bunch, but it is a lot like putting together a puzzle: enjoyable, but can be tedious at times. It's almost like reading 4-5 stories at once, counting the summary, which can be overwhelming for lazy readers like me who sometimes want to just cut to the chase<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />. You may want to consider removing the summaries, or make them smaller or less frequent. The letters usually give enough of an idea of what's going on, especially with three of them together (sometimes more). Most D&amp;D stories only include a single player's (or DM's perspective), and stand well on that alone. I think it's fantastic that all of you are so interested in writing so much, and writing it very well.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Faren, post: 5105557, member: 64953"] [b]feedback![/b] Hey PH, It's a fun read, and usually the letters bring out a nice element. But yeah, at other times, it's difficult to follow. I usually skim through the letters until I reach your summary, then go back and read through them. Both the journals and summaries are pretty well written, and you seem like a creative and talented bunch, but it is a lot like putting together a puzzle: enjoyable, but can be tedious at times. It's almost like reading 4-5 stories at once, counting the summary, which can be overwhelming for lazy readers like me who sometimes want to just cut to the chase:). You may want to consider removing the summaries, or make them smaller or less frequent. The letters usually give enough of an idea of what's going on, especially with three of them together (sometimes more). Most D&D stories only include a single player's (or DM's perspective), and stand well on that alone. I think it's fantastic that all of you are so interested in writing so much, and writing it very well. [/QUOTE]

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