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Message: <blockquote data-quote="LuisCarlos17f" data-source="post: 9653262" data-attributes="member: 6802378">[MEDIA=youtube]lMt6C2eTgww[/MEDIA](I add this song as source of inspiration and to create atmosphere)Tapestria, the battlefield for the loom of the eternity.(Isekai meets the 70s) In a far wildspace a pantheon of deities ruled a rich civilitation what was started its path. Among them a marriage had got a beatiful (out and within) and pure daughter whose name was Inmaculata. Her beauty and good sense were legendary, and many wished a wife like her. Among the possible suitors, one stood out above the rest, the prince of the dark feys. He was good looking and very powerful but his heart too cold, proud and selfish. Of course he also suggested a marriage alliance Inma as future wife but her parents and the rest of the pantheon didn't want she was unhappy with that souless and capricious. When the dark fey prince understood nice words and diplomacy didn't work he made a threat. Inma would be his future wife or she would suffer the curse of the madness. The answer by Inma herself was "the oracle has talked: the innocent maid will be healed and the stoneheart will be punished".  Faced with such a refusal, he carried out his threat. The pantheon used its divine power to protected her loved and innocent child but it was not enough....It started with horrible nightmares where she woke up crying. Later she couldn't wake up for days, or she was in catatonic state. Other times she had lost her memory and It took time to recover it. And a day she finally fell into a coma during more one year. When she returned it seemed that the torment was over but she wouldn't be the same innocent girl ever more. She didn't show the same level of joy and innocent, but she was still affectionate with her parents and kind to everyone. When everyone thought things would go back to normal, she started surprising everyone. One of his first measures was the creation of the first orphanages. Her idea was too new and strange then but she was allowed and a couple of generations later she earned a great prestige thanks to this. The second surprise was a new novice in certain temple of the deity of the medicine. But this novice didn't help so much to heal the body but the body and the mind, and soon this earned a great fame not only to heal the insanity but also a wise adviser for families and traders. The mortals didn't know but this novice was Inma with a secret identity. The next surprise was when she started to invent new things, for example the imprent, but also new musical instruments. And later she published stories and songs. There came a time when she was asked if these works came from her own creativity. She replied that if they were plagiarisms, where would the original sources come from. The next great change was the discovery of the mystic arts or psionic powers. This time Inma admitted to have discovered when she was facing the curse of the insanity. The wicked dark fey prince wasn't wellcome by the pantheon, but this didn't stop to act like a predators looking for young maids. Soon he discovered his tricks didn't work so good because somebody warned the maids against him. The dark fey prince discovered the responsible was the novice from the main temple of the medicine deity. He tried to conquer the heart of the novice, ignoring maybe, that she was Imma (and this was getting ready her vengeance). The novice replied mockingly she never could be interested in someone so selfish, conceited, and weak-willed. The dark fey prince never felt so offended and hurt in his pride. He didn't notice he has just taken the jait. Inma challenge him to a staring duel and the dark fey prince blinded by the wrath accepted. This was the worst mistake of all his life. Only a couple of second seeing Inma's eyes were enough. Then the wicked dark fey prince felt in an instant he felt all the agony he had caused Inma during years as his own. The divine powers to protected her against the curse of insanity worked in a too strange way. When she slept she dreamed to be in a too diferent place, a city with buildings taller than a tower, by mortar, brick, metal and even some facades completely by crystal, with metal vehicles instead wood carriages, and lights without fire. The first times she appeared in those cities in ruins, being chased by undeads, mutants or other weird monsters. Later she appeared in city when this was still inhabited. The natives thought she was crazy and sent her to a mental asylum. There she met a therapist who didn't believe her either but she helped everyway with sensible advices. When Inma hope the recovery from the insanity curse was just to arrive the city suffered a undead outbreak. Inma wasn't so powerful like her parents or the rest of pantheon but with some piece of divine magic she could help a lot to the survivors. But it wasn't enough and nobody could survive. In the next dream Inma was again in the same city before the apocaliptic event. She was more ready and her divine power was higher thanks the suvivors who trusted her. It was not enough and the time loop started again, but with more divine power. After several failures and reboots she could stop the first outbreak. Some innocent lifes were lost but this time most of the population could evacuate the city. That civilitation was more advanced technologically but the digital age couldn't arrive yet because the digital devices without supernatural protection were "haunted" or cursed by an unknown cause. Inma became the leader of the survivors and thanks the hope she inspired her divine rank leveled up. Thanks this her cognitive powers helped to discovered the truth. Ages ago the life in that world was too hard because it suffered meteor rain usually. Then an alien spaceship appeared, it hadn't crashed really, only a not too good landscaping. It was from an alternate timeline escaping a tragic cataclysm. And it was not the only one with the same idea. Other "space arks" appeared in other places of the planet. These "arks" were controlled by supercomputers and they untrusted each others but they could agree a no-agression pact. The native spirits weren't happy with the arrival of these intruders but the supercomputers could reach a pact with the native spirits. They would be allowed to be there if they used their advanced technology to stop the meteor rains. The arks also accepted to be underground in secret vaults to not affect the native biosphere. This alliance worked for a long time, and the spirits get used to the presence of the arks. Thanks these there was more life and the specied evolutioned fasters, but the supercomputers couldn't work for all the eternity. Then spirits and supercomputers agreed a spiritual merger and this worked. Now those AIs had reached a spark of divine power but it was not enough. Now they had got like the level of demigods and they needed worshipped... and humanoids appeared, maybe from other world or created by the "idols". The idols helped and guided sentient species to create the first civilitations, but thanks the experience they understand they shouldn't be too superprotective and mortals had to learn to fend for themselves. A true leader teachs others to become leaders. Inma thanks speculative fiction from that advanced civilitation could understand better the concept of time-travel and alternate universe. When she was investigating the psionic powers and the psicoportation she discovered the demiplane of the building materials. This was like a cluster of warehouses with materials used to craft tools or buildings. When she investigated this demiplane she could discover a path toward her mother world. The mind of the dark fey prince collapsed when he felt as his all the painful memories of monsters and people suffering. He was left in a catatonic state. Really Inma didn't feel pleasure in the awaited revengue, only relief because those monster couldn't hurt other innocent again. With her psicoportation powers Inma sent the dark fey prince to the "demiplane of bricks" where he couldn't hurt anybody else, and she hoped that. She was right.. almost. The presence of the wicked dark fey prince corrupted a part of the demiplane, causing a shatering. The new plane was like an endless cluster of dungeons with traps. The monsters and sentient habitants arrived later, from that world with advanced technology, thanks native who also learnt psicoportation or thanks mutant powers. If you want something style "anomalies" and "new weird" fiction maybe this could help.</blockquote>

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