Reply to thread

Message

<blockquote data-quote="Sniktch" data-source="post: 694433" data-attributes="member: 7704">Drawmack, I just checked and my second e-mail got rejected too.&nbsp; Drop me a line if you see this and then I'll reply.Pictures will be going up momentarily, but first...Rd1 HalfElf vs NoOneHalfElf, you have the start of a good story.&nbsp; I enjoyed this one and found the ideas presented to be interesting, but I found it skeletal.&nbsp; I think it could have used a good bit of fleshing out, as it raises more questions in my mind than it answers.&nbsp; As it stands, it feels disjointed and incomplete, and throws in at least one of the pictures as an afterthought (the lady on the cliff).&nbsp; Next time I think you should sit on your hands for an extra day and use the extra time to detail it further - I did the same thing in the last contest and in retrospect I needed to distance myself just a little more from my work before submitting it.&nbsp; Overall, though, a worthy entry and good luck in the next round!NoOneI thought this was a pretty strong entry.&nbsp; I really liked this tale of the doomed pilgrim and the demon fated to test him.&nbsp; Nice imaginative use of the pictures, too, for the most part, although it seems to me that you've merged the picture of the bat and the girl on the cliff somewhat.&nbsp; To be honest, I'm not completely sure where picture 4 fits in exactly, although I think I have a good idea.&nbsp; You might want to label the pics in the future, just for clarity.&nbsp; Still, I thought pic 1, 2, and 3 were handled very well, and a nice little story.&nbsp; Good work; I like forward to seeing your next entry.From Maldur:HalfelfsorcererStrange future story, It reads as the back of a campaign setting book.&nbsp; I just begs for more informaion about the world her describes.NoOneofConsequenceA travel story, Cryptic tests. A part of a larger story but still a whole.My vote goes for: NoOneofConsequenceAs Noones story Has better unity, it hasa beginning, a middle and a end.&nbsp; Where as Halfelfs story was more only a beginning.Next, Jameumz and NiTessine, then on to new pics...</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Sniktch, post: 694433, member: 7704"] Drawmack, I just checked and my second e-mail got rejected too. Drop me a line if you see this and then I'll reply. Pictures will be going up momentarily, but first... Rd1 HalfElf vs NoOne HalfElf, you have the start of a good story. I enjoyed this one and found the ideas presented to be interesting, but I found it skeletal. I think it could have used a good bit of fleshing out, as it raises more questions in my mind than it answers. As it stands, it feels disjointed and incomplete, and throws in at least one of the pictures as an afterthought (the lady on the cliff). Next time I think you should sit on your hands for an extra day and use the extra time to detail it further - I did the same thing in the last contest and in retrospect I needed to distance myself just a little more from my work before submitting it. Overall, though, a worthy entry and good luck in the next round! NoOne I thought this was a pretty strong entry. I really liked this tale of the doomed pilgrim and the demon fated to test him. Nice imaginative use of the pictures, too, for the most part, although it seems to me that you've merged the picture of the bat and the girl on the cliff somewhat. To be honest, I'm not completely sure where picture 4 fits in exactly, although I think I have a good idea. You might want to label the pics in the future, just for clarity. Still, I thought pic 1, 2, and 3 were handled very well, and a nice little story. Good work; I like forward to seeing your next entry. From Maldur: Halfelfsorcerer Strange future story, It reads as the back of a campaign setting book. I just begs for more informaion about the world her describes. NoOneofConsequence A travel story, Cryptic tests. A part of a larger story but still a whole. My vote goes for: NoOneofConsequence As Noones story Has better unity, it hasa beginning, a middle and a end. Where as Halfelfs story was more only a beginning. Next, Jameumz and NiTessine, then on to new pics... [/QUOTE]

Verification