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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Asisreo" data-source="post: 8278395" data-attributes="member: 7019027">So, I've mulled over an Introduction and I want to know the general opinion. Its fairly basic, but I put just a little flair of color anyways. I'll also be drawing a map of the world that gives an idea of the scale of the Material Plane. <h2>Introduction</h2><h4>Background</h4>Your impressive exploits are known all throughout the world. Facing the many perils of the world of Gia, your renown as the material plane's champions is uncontested. In this world, there are 3 continents: Zelidan, Ingru, and the Gartlands. Zelidan consists of 2 large countries which are peaceful with each other politically, but the people are becoming more paranoid of the other country. These two countries are The Beltian Empire and The Republic of Xharna. Beltia has a Emperor and several lords that preside over the smaller lands. The Republic of Xharna is governed by counsel. Ingru is a continent of smaller states with a loosely centralized union in the form of the Ingru Alliance. Trade and Commerce between these states, as well as defense resources, are allocated through this alliance. This balance keeps any one state from violently overstepping another. It has been this way for 200 years. The Gartlands are a dangerous, largely unexplored continent. Some of the strongest creatures roam this land and tribes of evil-worshipping humanoids prey on those that explore haphazardly. <h4>Call to Action</h4>Returning from your most recent expedition, you take 10 years of downtime and rest. But this rest is briefly interrupted by a dream. Strada, goddess of protection, rouses you from your dreams with a message:"A struggle of the forces of order and chaos which cycles every eon has arrived once more. This struggle leads to the side victorious ruling over the planes for 100-years. If Order wins, free-will can no longer exist for those 100-years. All intelligent creatures will become robots of productivity. If Chaos wins, the shackles of the planes will be unleashed for 100-years, permitting creatures like demons and abberations to freely inhabit the Material Plane and more.However, I forsee the disturbance of this cycle. For each force is equally balanced this time, and the struggle could lead to the extinction of all intelligent beings. You, champions of the material plane, must tip the scale in one side's favor. Defeat one of the generals of either Chaos or Order and save the world! The general of Chaos is found in Limbo, residing in his fortress of the Flame, Wind, Water, and Stone. The general of Order is found in Mechanus, within his Crystal Sanctum.Go, champions of the material, and defend the multiverse!"How does this introduction sound?</blockquote>

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