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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Mengu" data-source="post: 4717743" data-attributes="member: 65726">I like the idea. I didn't look through everything but I did look through the lower level powers. Here is some feedback: Create some new keywords to make your text a bit cleaner. 1. DA: Dragonbreath Attack (instead of str+2 or dex+2 or con+2, increase to +4/+6 etc wording)2. [d]: Dragonbreath damage die3. [N]: Natural weapon damage die4. Dragonbreath Type: instead of acid, cold, fire, etc. Snarling Bite: Way too powerful as an at-will power. Add Twin Strike or Dual Strike into the mix, and you could be attacking 4 times a round. Here is a different idea: Snarling Bite Dragonborn Attack 1At-will Melee 1Standard ActionTarget(s): 1 creature.Attack: DA vs. ReflexHit: 1[N]. Your next DA attack against the target before the end of your next turn deals an additional [d] damage if it hits. Draconic Rage: Seems a bit weak for a daily. I'd be tempted to make it a close burst 2, and change damage to [d]+Constitution. Dragon Spit: To give you an example of how much simpler this power could look: Dragonspit Dragonborn Attack 1You spit of glob of energy at a distant opponent.Encounter ● Dragonbreath TypeMinor Action Ranged 5Target(s): One creatureAttack: DA vs. ReflexHit: 1[d] + Constitution modifier damage. On a related note, you could make an addendum to this power and similar ranged powers that says if you have Hurl Breath feat, increase range by 5 squares. Elemental Hide: Seems a little too powerful as an encounter power with a sustain. I'd either get rid of the sustain, or make it a daily power. That's about all I have time for at the moment, maybe I'll take a look at the rest later. Hope this was helpful. Edit: Grrr, I don't know why it keeps converting ["D"] to [d].</blockquote>

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