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Message: <blockquote data-quote="dave2008" data-source="post: 7530363" data-attributes="member: 83242">A decent start, thank you for sharing.  A couple of comments:1) The CR is off.  I did a quick check and I get:  defensive CR 13 & attack CR 21+.  So (13+21)/2 = CR 172) At CR 17 her proficiency bonus is +6, so everything needs to be adjusted accordingly3) Charisma should either not be listed (you don't list saves without proficiency) or it should be +10 (per comment #2)4) Dragon's typically have expertise in Perception, so her Perception bonus should be +15 (per comment #2) with a passive Perception of +255) She needs some movement options.  Either a limited (distance) teleport action or legendary action or flyby action or wing attack legendary action (see all adult or ancient dragon entries)6) I would recommend adding innate spellcasting.  That is a glaring weakness in the official WotC version.  No need to replicate it here.PS I agree with @<a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/member.php?u=71699" target="_blank">clearstream</a> , Stealth proficiency doesn't really make sense for Tiamat - even if it is just an aspect.EDIT:  7) Her HD / hit points are calculated wrong.  Huge creatures use a d12 not a d10.  It should be:  207 (18d12 + 90).  This then raises her defensive CR to 14.  Coupled with increasing her proficiency bonus as noted in comment #2 gives her an overall CR closer to 18.</blockquote>