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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Radiant" data-source="post: 2290141" data-attributes="member: 12018">ok here's my concept. Going to be away till wednesday so any silence from my part does not mean I could not handle the criticism <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />for Entsuropi:[sblock]This is actualy an older character created for Tokiwongs mecha game but since he vanished from the boards over a year ago I think I can safely asume that game won't go on.Anyway here you go: Name: Lisa KyleProffesion:  Pilot Hobbies: WorkBackground:Almost the complete Kyle family was killed in the crossfire of a terrorist attack on the city states she lived in fifteen years ago. The only survivor was their youngest daughter Lisa who was found in the smoldering remains of her families home by rescue teams. She had suffered severe burns, light brain damage from oxygen loss and scarred lungs from smoke inhalation. She was in the hospital for weeks and only heavy transplantation and cybernetic replacements kept her alive. A variety of smaller implants where crafted to replace parts that where too damaged to heal, including both her arms and shoulder and even small parts of her brain.(that stuff doesn’t do anything except looking cool)No one could ever discern if it was the heavy replacements on her body or the shock of the attack and the sight of all her family dying in the fire but after that event Lisa never showed any kind of strong feeling again and acted more like a machine than a human. Her neural implants allow her very clear thinking and heightened reflexes, making her a gifted pilot, especialy as long as she is connected to the IntNet and not held down by slow moving flesh.Still she is not totaly damaged and still capable of feelings, they are just burried real deep. She also has a terrible fear of fire, a remnant of her experience as a child.Concept: Kyle is one of those oh so cool characters who could freeze water by just looking at it. Her uniform allways sits perfectly, her hair is allways straight and close to her head and even if the whole ship burns around her she will probably one raise an eyebrow. I think "ice-queen" would be a good summary of the concept.Skills and stuff: Well obviously she should be a good pilot since the group has to count on her being able to do that. Otherwise I'd imagine her at least a bit talented with the net and tech (doesn't have to be much but she should at least know what the stuff is about). Some cyberthing like increased strength in her arms, or whatever else you think is cool and strikes your fancy would be nice but is  not important. I'm adding some one word description to various stats so that you can get an easy picture of what I have in mind. You could say these are the first thing that would come to mind if anyoen who knows the person would be asked about her:Health: (old injuries) Skill: (precise)Social: (sharplooking)Physical: (coordinated)Mind: (analyzing)[/sblock]</blockquote>

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