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<blockquote data-quote="Brogarn" data-source="post: 2745307" data-attributes="member: 15147"><p>Ya, looking back, I should of kept those minor quibbles to myself. I'm more than happy with this story hour and hardly expect that level of editting. The amount of story you offer more than makes up for any small errors. I'm blown away that you manage to write this much with everything else you do.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Mostin... what a bad ass. I will always remember the line "Mostin learns timestop" with almost school girl giddiness. If only Sep wrote more...</p><p></p><p>That's not to detract from your characters, though. They fairly well rock, even if you do beat them down to negative hit points on a regular basis. He's just the quintessential wizard without the silly hat and pipe. The type of wizard I would want to emulate if I could find a local PnP game. >.<</p><p></p><p></p><p>EDIT : Oh, and the Umbar character is the type of person that makes me loathe organized religion. Nicely done on keeping his attitude consistent so far. Inquisitors are such... well, we'll say poopy heads and so anal retentive to the rules that you gotta wonder if the god(s) they serve don't roll <em>their</em> eyes when these guys come around. Or find an excuse to be elsewhere.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Brogarn, post: 2745307, member: 15147"] Ya, looking back, I should of kept those minor quibbles to myself. I'm more than happy with this story hour and hardly expect that level of editting. The amount of story you offer more than makes up for any small errors. I'm blown away that you manage to write this much with everything else you do. Mostin... what a bad ass. I will always remember the line "Mostin learns timestop" with almost school girl giddiness. If only Sep wrote more... That's not to detract from your characters, though. They fairly well rock, even if you do beat them down to negative hit points on a regular basis. He's just the quintessential wizard without the silly hat and pipe. The type of wizard I would want to emulate if I could find a local PnP game. >.< EDIT : Oh, and the Umbar character is the type of person that makes me loathe organized religion. Nicely done on keeping his attitude consistent so far. Inquisitors are such... well, we'll say poopy heads and so anal retentive to the rules that you gotta wonder if the god(s) they serve don't roll [i]their[/i] eyes when these guys come around. Or find an excuse to be elsewhere. [/QUOTE]
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