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<blockquote data-quote="DralonXitz" data-source="post: 2567734" data-attributes="member: 20083">Here's my character, tell me if there's anything that needs to be fixed Blue.Name: Alexander SaturnClass: Charismatic Hero 5Occupation: Celebrity(Singer)Size: MediumGender: MaleStrength: 10(+0)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; BAB: +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; XP: 15,000/21,000Dexterity: 11(+0)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Speed: 30'&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; HP: (5d6 + 6)Constitution: 10(+0)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Init: +0&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Grapple: +2Intelligence: 13(+1)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Reputation: +7Wisdom: 13(+1)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Wealth: 10Charisma: 19(+4)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Base&nbsp; &nbsp; Armor&nbsp;&nbsp; Def&nbsp; &nbsp; Dex&nbsp;&nbsp; Size&nbsp; &nbsp; Nat&nbsp; &nbsp; Misc&nbsp; &nbsp; TotalArmor:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 10&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 10&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Base&nbsp; &nbsp; Mod&nbsp; &nbsp; Misc&nbsp; &nbsp; TotalFort:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 3Ref:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 3Will:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; 1Weapon&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Attack&nbsp; &nbsp; Damage&nbsp; &nbsp; CriticalPunch&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1d3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 19-20Switchblade&nbsp;&nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1d4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 19-20Languages: English(R/W) Kiswalihi(R/W) Japanese(R/W)Talents&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Charm(+5&nbsp; to all Charisma based checks on Males)Fast-Talk(+5 to all Bluff, Diplomacy, or Gamble checks while trying to lie or cheat)Favor(Ability to ask any source for a favor, and +5 to any check involving asking a favor, DC varies by Favor at GM’s discretion)Skills(64/12pts, 8/4 max ranks)Skills&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Ranks&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Mod&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Misc&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; TotalBluff&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 14Diplomacy&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 14Gather Information&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 14Knowledge(Art)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 9Perform(Sing)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 12Profession(Singer)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 8&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 11Feats:DeceptiveRenownTrustworthyWindfall(2)Simple Weapons ProficiencyEquipment:SwitchbladeLamborghini Diablo(Black)Cell Phone(Motorola Razr)Appearance: Alexander Saturn is known as one of the world’s sexiest men.&nbsp; Standing 5'11 at a lean 150 pounds, Alexander has a trim, toned figure, that accents his tight clothing perfectly.&nbsp; Impeccably dressed, Alexander has always been on the forefront of fashion, with personal connections to some of Italy’s most popular designers.&nbsp; Alexander has short, black hair, with silver highlights through it.&nbsp; His eyes are a piercing sapphire blue, with a golden triangle birthmark in his right eye.&nbsp; He has tan skin, with a clean face of any facial hair.&nbsp; Background: Alexander Saturn.&nbsp; The name is known worldwide, from Tokyo to Geneva.&nbsp; Quite possibly the most famous singer of all time, Alexander Saturn has a wild and decadent history that would put most musicians to shame.Born in Zanzibar, he was born with the name Dominic Shalkora.&nbsp; He attended public school until 14, when he began to display a talent for singing.&nbsp; His father believed he had a great destiny ahead of him, and against his mother’s wishes, sent him to a music school in Vienna.&nbsp; It was there where he truly transformed his voice from that of a pubescent schoolboy into a mix between an Angel and the Devil himself.&nbsp; With an almost supernatural range of four octaves, he was top of his class and the most famous singer in Vienna.&nbsp; Even at age 17, his solo album was already on top of the Austrian charts.&nbsp; At age 19, he left Vienna for Tokyo, to pursue his music career even further.&nbsp; His goal was to become the greatest singer on the Earth, and he was dedicated to it.&nbsp; He knew his native African name would never roll on the tongues of the people, so he changed it to a more attractive name, Alexander Saturn.&nbsp; He released his first album under the new title, “Saturn Rising”.&nbsp; It sold an astonishing 5,000,000 copies worldwide, and skyrocketed him to paramount levels of fame.It was around this time that he met the 3 men who would compose with him the rock band that would shake the world for the next 11 years, Etyrnyty.&nbsp; Their names were Kitsuru Homoko, James Erwood, and Kyle VanPhoenix.&nbsp; They met at a concert in Tokyo, and instantly knew that together, they could conquer the earth.They took to the studio the next week, where they recorded their debut album, “Etyrnyty”.&nbsp; With chart-toppers like “Stratosphere” and “Omega Denial”, they sold 12,000,000 copies.&nbsp; With each new album, they sold more astonishing numbers, broke more records, and blew out more stadiums than any rock band before.&nbsp; Etyrnyty was the band to end all bands.But not all was glorious behind the scenes.&nbsp; Alexander had succumb to a hedonistic lifestyle, and a mixture of drugs, champagne, and other forms of excess caused him to have total heart failure one night in Paris.&nbsp; The paramedics arrived to find Alexander dead on the hotel floor, but thankfully, Adrenaline somehow brought him back.&nbsp; Kitsuru, Alex’s best friend, was deeply scared by this, and tried to convince Alexander to enter rehab.&nbsp; But Alexander’s stubborn attitude was too much for that, and he left the same week for Tokyo, where he entered a 6 month spree of decadence.&nbsp; Finally, on July 11th, it all came crashing down when he overdid it again and succumbed to another heart attack.&nbsp; An hour later, he was found by Kitsuru, who had came to Tokyo to save his life.&nbsp; But he was too late, or so he thought.&nbsp; Adrenaline once again was Alex’s savior, and when he awakened, he found himself in a rehab clinic, with no chance of escape.The next year of his life was spent in rehabilitation, where Alexander recovered from his addictions and was finally able to return to a clean lifestyle.&nbsp; He returned to Saturn Studios in Tokyo, Eternyty’s Recording Studio, where the group recorded their 9th album, “Return to Earth”.&nbsp; The album was heavily influenced by Alex’s jaunt in rehab, but was considered one of their greatest records nonetheless.&nbsp; Now, Alexander Saturn has been called by the RPIAA to lead this group of musician’s in the world’s greatest tour, for charity purposes to the public, but in reality, a much darker motive is behind it...</blockquote>

[QUOTE="DralonXitz, post: 2567734, member: 20083"] Here's my character, tell me if there's anything that needs to be fixed Blue. [b]Name: Alexander Saturn Class: Charismatic Hero 5 Occupation: Celebrity(Singer) Size: Medium Gender: Male[/b] Strength: 10(+0) BAB: +2 XP: 15,000/21,000 Dexterity: 11(+0) Speed: 30' HP: (5d6 + 6) Constitution: 10(+0) Init: +0 Grapple: +2 Intelligence: 13(+1) Reputation: +7 Wisdom: 13(+1) Wealth: 10 Charisma: 19(+4) Base Armor Def Dex Size Nat Misc Total Armor: 10 0 10 Base Mod Misc Total Fort: 3 0 0 3 Ref: 3 0 0 3 Will: 1 0 0 1 Weapon Attack Damage Critical Punch 2 1d3 19-20 Switchblade +2 1d4 19-20 Languages: English(R/W) Kiswalihi(R/W) Japanese(R/W) Talents Charm(+5 to all Charisma based checks on Males) Fast-Talk(+5 to all Bluff, Diplomacy, or Gamble checks while trying to lie or cheat) Favor(Ability to ask any source for a favor, and +5 to any check involving asking a favor, DC varies by Favor at GM’s discretion) Skills(64/12pts, 8/4 max ranks) Skills Ranks Mod Misc Total Bluff 8 4 2 14 Diplomacy 8 4 2 14 Gather Information 8 4 2 14 Knowledge(Art) 8 1 0 9 Perform(Sing) 8 4 0 12 Profession(Singer) 8 1 2 11 Feats: Deceptive Renown Trustworthy Windfall(2) Simple Weapons Proficiency Equipment: Switchblade Lamborghini Diablo(Black) Cell Phone(Motorola Razr) [b]Appearance[/b]: Alexander Saturn is known as one of the world’s sexiest men. Standing 5'11 at a lean 150 pounds, Alexander has a trim, toned figure, that accents his tight clothing perfectly. Impeccably dressed, Alexander has always been on the forefront of fashion, with personal connections to some of Italy’s most popular designers. Alexander has short, black hair, with silver highlights through it. His eyes are a piercing sapphire blue, with a golden triangle birthmark in his right eye. He has tan skin, with a clean face of any facial hair. [b]Background[/b]: Alexander Saturn. The name is known worldwide, from Tokyo to Geneva. Quite possibly the most famous singer of all time, Alexander Saturn has a wild and decadent history that would put most musicians to shame. Born in Zanzibar, he was born with the name Dominic Shalkora. He attended public school until 14, when he began to display a talent for singing. His father believed he had a great destiny ahead of him, and against his mother’s wishes, sent him to a music school in Vienna. It was there where he truly transformed his voice from that of a pubescent schoolboy into a mix between an Angel and the Devil himself. With an almost supernatural range of four octaves, he was top of his class and the most famous singer in Vienna. Even at age 17, his solo album was already on top of the Austrian charts. At age 19, he left Vienna for Tokyo, to pursue his music career even further. His goal was to become the greatest singer on the Earth, and he was dedicated to it. He knew his native African name would never roll on the tongues of the people, so he changed it to a more attractive name, Alexander Saturn. He released his first album under the new title, “Saturn Rising”. It sold an astonishing 5,000,000 copies worldwide, and skyrocketed him to paramount levels of fame. It was around this time that he met the 3 men who would compose with him the rock band that would shake the world for the next 11 years, Etyrnyty. Their names were Kitsuru Homoko, James Erwood, and Kyle VanPhoenix. They met at a concert in Tokyo, and instantly knew that together, they could conquer the earth. They took to the studio the next week, where they recorded their debut album, “Etyrnyty”. With chart-toppers like “Stratosphere” and “Omega Denial”, they sold 12,000,000 copies. With each new album, they sold more astonishing numbers, broke more records, and blew out more stadiums than any rock band before. Etyrnyty was the band to end all bands. But not all was glorious behind the scenes. Alexander had succumb to a hedonistic lifestyle, and a mixture of drugs, champagne, and other forms of excess caused him to have total heart failure one night in Paris. The paramedics arrived to find Alexander dead on the hotel floor, but thankfully, Adrenaline somehow brought him back. Kitsuru, Alex’s best friend, was deeply scared by this, and tried to convince Alexander to enter rehab. But Alexander’s stubborn attitude was too much for that, and he left the same week for Tokyo, where he entered a 6 month spree of decadence. Finally, on July 11th, it all came crashing down when he overdid it again and succumbed to another heart attack. An hour later, he was found by Kitsuru, who had came to Tokyo to save his life. But he was too late, or so he thought. Adrenaline once again was Alex’s savior, and when he awakened, he found himself in a rehab clinic, with no chance of escape. The next year of his life was spent in rehabilitation, where Alexander recovered from his addictions and was finally able to return to a clean lifestyle. He returned to Saturn Studios in Tokyo, Eternyty’s Recording Studio, where the group recorded their 9th album, “Return to Earth”. The album was heavily influenced by Alex’s jaunt in rehab, but was considered one of their greatest records nonetheless. Now, Alexander Saturn has been called by the RPIAA to lead this group of musician’s in the world’s greatest tour, for charity purposes to the public, but in reality, a much darker motive is behind it... [/QUOTE]

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