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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Tellerve" data-source="post: 1199366" data-attributes="member: 2412">I was under the impression I had stated my admiration for your writing already, but a bit more never hurt anyone.  So, let me just say I really enjoy reading your story hour.As for critiques, well I am not sure there is much I could really say...at least not off the top of my head.  Maybe if I went back and really concentrated I could find something.  But I find your writing very powerful in terms of imagery and pacing.  The times you have battles are great and full of suspence.  Apart from the one time that most everyone got a bit confused with the storyline with Poridel I have very much enjoyed you switching around to the different characters.  It has been stated by others that your characterizations are awesome.  I also feel that your story shows off a very vibrant world.  It helps that my friend, Cinerarium, has gushed about your dm'ing skills.  And after reading more of your world through his story hour about the game you dm for them well, it just is great.In terms of Sep's, well the reason I love sep's is of course he is a fantastic writer.  He, like you, is able to paint very vivid pictures while maintaining a good pace in the writing.  I also am just blown away by Sep's cosmology and the amount of work done for it.  His names also are just utterly astounding to me.  Both of you have as I've said very vivid and suspensful battle write ups.  Obviously their characters do a bit more as they are 15-18 levels higher.  But even so I thought your characters were higher than when I saw them in the rogue's gallery.  Which in my mind proves that your able to portray the combat well and not as low level combat in dnd typically is...at least for me.And finally I'd say that the reason I like your's and Sep's so much is I would LOVE to play in them.  I crave a dm that has that much unique world built and interaction with everything.  Perhaps it doesn't in reality play out at a table nearly as well, but I don't know that.  And so I continue to dream that it does and that it would be great to be at the table with Eadric, Mostin, or Vath and John of Pell.Good players playing good characters enveloped in a great world run by an ingenious DM means fun <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Thanks and keep writin' Destan,Tellerve</blockquote>

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