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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Cinerarium" data-source="post: 1209576" data-attributes="member: 9349">Another incredible post Destan!  My favorite part was definitely at the end, with Baden's reaction to Poridel's death.  But there were many excellent bits throughout.And to echo another comment earlier, absolutely DO NOT hold back on your writing style.  I understand wanting to keep Eric's grandma happy with content, but never sacrifice your artistic integrity in the process.  The warning on content is more to keep trolls from posting junk than for hobbling your creativity.That said, I'm not a big fan of urine-and-blood references (makes me wince) but it's the style of this story hour, and the story would suffer without it.One thing I would like to see more of in terms of content, and that I think will come out more now that you've caught up to where your group's in-character posts begin, are the intra-character interactions.  We've had a few so far, and I definitely look forward to more.  For instance, I was surprised a bit that Baden reacted so emotionally to Poridel's death.  I hadn't seen them build such a strong bond in the earlier story hour.Again, thank you for an excellent story hour.  The writing continues to improve.  Maybe all of us devoted Destan fans should go pimp his story hours?Cinerarium</blockquote>