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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Darthor" data-source="post: 1210016" data-attributes="member: 10771">I am filled with a great sadness. For today I have reached the end of this story hour. I began it at the beginning of last week on the advice of one of my role-playing buddies. He was right when he told me its one of the best, right up there with Sep's.Thank you so much Destan for writing this and sharing your talents with us. I've received something wonderful and never paid a dime. I feel like I've stolen music from the internet.  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />You've asked for criticism. I would echo what others have said. I like the first person accounts of battles and events to be high in frequency compared to the retellings after the fact. But I also like things to be switched up every so often.I also would like a few entries from some of the other characters besides Vath or John (two of my favorites, but still, let's here more from the others).The leader of the Cyrics going down in the last battle off-camera was a little disappointing. I wanted his demise to be up close and personal. Along with anybody else's who you have made me despise so much.I'll end by restating that I'm incredibly impressed with your writing and have enjoyed it immensely. I DM and I write a little and I hope to grow up to be like you.David</blockquote>

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