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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Tumakhunter" data-source="post: 1211613" data-attributes="member: 12191">I've been following your SH for some time, now, and I must say that I really love it.  I don't normally comment, not because I'm not enjoying the story, but merely because I don't have much to say.  I could throw in the occasional 'Wow,' or 'Damn,' but that doesn't seem suficient, and I rarely have time to compose something better.  But you asked for comments, so here goes.Keep the tone.  Anyone who doesn't like the dark tone conveyed in your story has the right to not read it, and those who DO read it are obviously OK with it.Bounce the POVs around a bit.  Hearing from more of the PCs perspectives is a good thing.  Hearing mostly from John's POV is not - at least, not since you had originally set things up by going from character to character.And finally, STOP SKIPPING BITS!!  I want to know what happened with the meeting with the Sorrow Elf.  I want to know how the fight with the wolfen (?) went, and not just hear about it after.  A lot of things got referred to in that post, but it was done in an offhand "by the way, this happened, too" kind of way.  Wholly dissatisfying.Your most recent post, the fight with the Cyrics was excellent.  I really loved the entangle spell, and Baden's reaction to Poridel's death was superb.  This is what I want to see (well, not necessarily the gore in every update, but I think you get the idea).Well done, and keep up the good work.</blockquote>

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