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<blockquote data-quote="DrZombie" data-source="post: 1298025" data-attributes="member: 15640"><p>[LURKING MODE OFF]</p><p> </p><p>Piece by piece I've read this SH, and I must say I like it a lot. I love the "tired" feeling of the world, the general background of hopelessness and darkness. It's good to know I'm not the only one who has a dislike of the simple good/bad "Holywood" fantasy setting.</p><p> </p><p>A few posts ago you asked for comment. Since english is not my first language I'm not a writer myself, but I am an avid reader. As I said before, i love your writing style, the cool, distant descriptions of combat intermingled with in-character observations. The only thing I disliked is the combat scene with the gory description of Baden placing his axe where it really hurt. Not so much because of oversensitivity (I mean, have you ever seen "Braindead", I LOVE that movie (btw, directed by Peter "LOTR" Jackson) so I'm not the most sensitive guy) but because it clashed with the rest of the posts, it was a bit over the top, in my (very humble) opinion. </p><p> </p><p>I'd love to see a post from the vieuwpoint of the beatifully twisted mind of the half-Troll, my favorite char.</p><p> </p><p>One last thing, it might be good to edit the previous pages and erase all the *BUMPS* and the "I love your writing" posts (such as this one), leaving only those add a little something to the story. This would make it a lot easier on a newbie reading your SH for the first time.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>I feel for you, My roleplaying has been toned down to nothing at the moment(wife 4mth old son and a terrible job), but I have serious hopes for march.... Aaah well, we'll see. Hang in there.</p><p>If any of you wanna come over to Europe to see some history for yourself, let me know and I'll tell you how to avoid the tourist traps and where to see the real deal.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>[LURKING MODE ON]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="DrZombie, post: 1298025, member: 15640"] [LURKING MODE OFF] Piece by piece I've read this SH, and I must say I like it a lot. I love the "tired" feeling of the world, the general background of hopelessness and darkness. It's good to know I'm not the only one who has a dislike of the simple good/bad "Holywood" fantasy setting. A few posts ago you asked for comment. Since english is not my first language I'm not a writer myself, but I am an avid reader. As I said before, i love your writing style, the cool, distant descriptions of combat intermingled with in-character observations. The only thing I disliked is the combat scene with the gory description of Baden placing his axe where it really hurt. Not so much because of oversensitivity (I mean, have you ever seen "Braindead", I LOVE that movie (btw, directed by Peter "LOTR" Jackson) so I'm not the most sensitive guy) but because it clashed with the rest of the posts, it was a bit over the top, in my (very humble) opinion. I'd love to see a post from the vieuwpoint of the beatifully twisted mind of the half-Troll, my favorite char. One last thing, it might be good to edit the previous pages and erase all the *BUMPS* and the "I love your writing" posts (such as this one), leaving only those add a little something to the story. This would make it a lot easier on a newbie reading your SH for the first time. I feel for you, My roleplaying has been toned down to nothing at the moment(wife 4mth old son and a terrible job), but I have serious hopes for march.... Aaah well, we'll see. Hang in there. If any of you wanna come over to Europe to see some history for yourself, let me know and I'll tell you how to avoid the tourist traps and where to see the real deal. [LURKING MODE ON] [/QUOTE]
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