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Message: <blockquote data-quote="jezter6" data-source="post: 4054839" data-attributes="member: 6567">While I agree with some of your statements, I don't think the review was as harsh as you make it out to be. I fully agreed that Hentai wasn't my style, so I tried to keep it as fair as I could without thrashing the style.I understand you're a small company, but hey - layout is layout. Fonts staying the same throughout and quality looking tables are just part of a good product. If you wish to keep the 'small company = bad layout' going, that's cool - but don't charge $12 for it. I had $12 to spend on rpg's this weekend - and I opted for this over the Trude20 Adept's Handbook. I guarantee you, that for the same money, I would have got a professionally done book. If you're going to charge like the big dogs, be prepared to be judged in the same category. If you're printing out PDF's with a free PDF printer from Word or Open Office, then it's your own fault. If you're not going to have an editor look it over for spelling mistakes in 32 point font - it's your fault. Hire an editor. If you can't afford an editor, you can't afford to make $12 PDF games without getting a bad review or two. There's absolutely no reason to have spelling mistakes in an electronic document. As a small press company, you have very minimal deadlines to meet in this regard and have all the opportunity to take that final look over the product and notice the glaring issues that make a product look and feel like it was done professionally.Had this been half the price, I would have been half as dissapointed.Again, without being a true hentai fanboy, I tried to keep it as even as I could. The feats present some pretty awesome power for just one feat. Stuff that could break a game if not everyone is taking feats from this pool. Then again, you have stuff like Cosplay. does that really require a FEAT to use cosplay? And art, I even mentioned that some if it was neat (the covers). However, I remember the interior art looking exactly what my friend was drawing back in high school. He did end up going to art school and cleaned up his work a bit, but the art was bad clip art at best. Not to mention, much of it wasn't even to the style you seemed to be indicating:Tentacle sex I could see. Tribal warriors urinating on themselves is a not really supernatrual horror or bondage. I count two pieces of 'bondage' flavored artwork. I also count two pieces of urination artwork. Urination isn't listed as a 'specific sub-genre' in the book.</blockquote>

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