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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Ibram" data-source="post: 2231733" data-attributes="member: 17640">Here are some spells I've created for my homebrew game.  I'd like feedback on how clear the wording is and how balanced they seem.this link leads to a description of my magic system:<a href="http://www.enworld.org/showthread.php?t=130923" target="_blank">http://www.enworld.org/showthread.php?t=130923</a>Bind UndeadDark [Necromancy]Level: 4Components: V, S, FCasting Time: One minuteTarget: One creature with the undead typeRange: 25 ft + 5 ft / levelDuration: InstantaneousSaving Throw: Will NegatesSpell Resistance: YesDescription:    Through this spell the caster is able to gain control of a creature with the Undead type.  The undead and the caster must make opposed will saves.  If the caster wins then the undead is added to those under his control (this new undead cannot exceed the total undead the caster is allowed to control).  If the undead is a free willed undead (such as a vampire or a Wight) then every month the vampire may attempt to break free, though at a -4 profane penalty to the will save.  If the undead is under the control of another caster then the undead uses its controllers will save instead of its own.  If cast on desecrated land then the caster receives a +2 profane bonus to his will save, if unhallowed land is used then the bonus increases to +4 .Focus: a tiny wooden casket prepared by the caster, costing 25s.Brand of Tal’ru’nHigh Magic [Enchantment]Level: 2Components: V, SCasting Time: One Standard ActionTarget: One CreatureRange: TouchDuration: One hour per magic bonusSaving throw: Yes, will negatesSpell Resistance: YesDescription:    This spell places an invisible brand on the target, allowing the caster to follow him.  As long as the target is within 60 ft the caster knows (to within 5 ft) where the target is, otherwise the caster knows which direction and roughly how far away the target is.Falcons EyesNatural [Wild]Level: 1Components: V, SCasting Time: One Standard ActionRange: TouchTarget: A bird of Small or smaller sizeDuration: Five minute / Magic BonusSaving Throw: None, can only be cast on a willing targetSpell Resistance: NoDescription:    When cast this spell allows the caster to see through the eyes of a bird.  The bird must be willing for the spell to take effect.  This spell does not allow you to communicate with the bird, or guide its movements, only observe what it sees.  If the bird is slain then the spell ends immediately.</blockquote>

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