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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Eeralai" data-source="post: 2022007" data-attributes="member: 15008">While we are waiting...Totally normal, Hellefire.  This is my first time competing, but when my husband competed I would check for judgements just as obsessively.  At least now I have a sense of accomplishment, but I still check the boards whenever I walk by the computer room.I finally read Macbeth's and Ruined's stories.  Great job!  Macbeth, your writing style in this story is very smooth, and the use of repition well done since it is a folktale.  Some of your previous stories have had a brusque style which has been jarring to me.  But the words go together seamlessly in this one.  Good job, and good picture use!What a fun story, Ruined!  I, too, often wonder if fairies ever get bored <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />  And your humor is good (from a previous post, it sounded like you were worried about that).  The beginning drew me in rapidly.  I think Macbeth had slightly better picture use, with the feet being your weak one, but you get kudos for originality!  Good luck to you both!</blockquote>