Suggestions/criticisms on my Call of Cthulhu plot... (my players stay out)

Arravis

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I normally run a Forgotten Realms campaign, but I've been asked to run a CoC one-shot for Halloween. Anyone else running a Halloween game?

Anyway the idea I had come up with I think is ok... but might be a bit too ambitious. At the Wizards CoC message board, someone posted a "true" story about an eskimo village that dissapeared and I really liked the idea (http://www.qsl.net/w5www/disappearances.html scroll to the last one).

It would be set in a tiny Alaskan town (Cthulhu meets Northern Exposure, I haven't thought of a good town name yet) that has recently been affected by an extremely rare disease. The disease had only been previously seen in remote parts of Africa and was thought to be currently extinct. A large number of the townsfolk have become ill and some have simply dissapeared or wandered off into the local nature reserve. The disease isn't deadly, but it does lead to extreme disfigurement. What has the CDC (Center for Disease Control) most worried its spread. The disease is normally not very contageous and had not previously led to severe schizophrenia as this outbreak has. Some of the PC's would be CDC personell from Atlanta others might be official personel from Juneau escorting the handful of CDC guys (I'll have a stack of Pre-Gen PC's available for the players).

As the PC's begin their investigation either one or more murders will occur. For an interesting twist, I have asked one of my players if she would be the main villain of the story. She's working on a character background for her psycho-killer (I have requested it be someone that can get along well in normal life, someone the other players wouldn't suspsect). Anyway, she beleives that her character will be the main villain of the plot... she's actually incorrect ;). This player is a jaded horror fan and has played alot of horror RPGs before (the other players have never played any horror games). Her thinking she's the "Big Bad Guy" is a red herring. It'll simply add to the paranoia and fear of the situation. Here's what really going on...

The Alaskan town the PCs are in is built near to the location where the Eskimo village was. At the turn of the century an extremely wealthy, slightly mad, doctor and pharmacist (basing him very lightly on H. Holmes; http://www.crimelibrary.com/serial_killers/history/holmes/index_1.html) named Ezra Denton became obsessed with the dissapearance. Ezra was an afficianado of the occult and beleived that whatever happened to the village involved a great power. Doctor Denton left his family in the mainland and constructed an expansive mansion (this will be the basis for it http://www.serianni.com/wh13.htm) close to where the Eskimo vilalge was so he could study it in detail.

The Eskimo village had tapped into a Shoggoth that was sealed, ages ago, in an underground temple. Unfortunately through their shaman's rites (or some other method) they awoke it... once the village was destroyed it returned to its slumber. That was until the Doctor Denton came, he awoke the Shoggoth and struch a number of unholy deals with the creature. Some sort of blood right was conducted and the doc was changed... part of the essence of the Shoggoth was combined with him, granting him immortality (or at least death from old age). He had immortality but his physical body began to go through subtle changes, which worsened every year.

As time passed, the Doctor Denton (who has now mutated considerably and looks more and more like his benefactor) watched his children and grandchildren, and great grand children grow into maturity. Though he could not die of old age, he had become crippled by his mutations and could barely move about. He needed to return to Alaska, to the Shoggorth, to regenerate himself. That is when he approached Joshua Denton, one of his grown, great grand children to help him.

Joshua is a pharmacological researcher for the company his great-grand father had long ago founded. Also, like his great-grand father, he is obsessed with the occult. Once the truth of Ezra Denton was known to him, he eagerly sought to help. He arranged transport for both of them to the small town. Ezra is staying at the abandoned mansion he had built so long ago and Joshua has become the town doctor. Beyond housing Ezra, the mansion also has a number of the more severe cases from the town. These people are now barely recognizable as human.

Ezra is gathering his energies in order to attempt to awaken the Shoggoth. Joshua, meanwhile, has been taking blood samples from the shoggoth and is hoping to create some sort of immortality serum (he's had no success though). He has been using the serums he's concocted on the local populace to test results. That is the "disease" the disease the CDC is trying to study. Anyway, If Joshua cannot find a way to make a useful serum, he plans to betray Ezra once he awakens the Shoggoth, wishing immortality for himself.

That's the basic story... I'm just trying to capture that Lovecraftian feel more then anything else. Any suggestions? Criticisms? Ideas? Comments?
 
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Arravis said:
That's the basic story... I'm just trying to capture that Lovecraftian feel more then anything else. Any suggestions? Criticisms? Ideas? Comments?
This is...interesting...to be certain, I *like* the evil PC as red herring idea, and yes, it's fairly Lovecraftian/X-Files/Delta Green-ish, but can you stuff ALL THAT into a one-nighter? It seems really...er, ambitious...for a single evening's play.

I don't presume to know how many hours your group can hang together on Halloween night, or how skilled a DM you are, but I'd recommend focusing most of the action in a small area (unless you can play again the following week or whatever). That small area seems to logically be the mansion...trust me (from experience): a small town is still big enough to take many nights of solid game play to explore! You'll probably want a focused, tight, paranoia-inducing adventure for a one-nighter. (Think Aliens vs. Alien--the frantic action vs. the slow creeping terror--"slow, creeping' takes time to establish.)

Hopefully this helps, and if you want me to elaborate, I can, but it seems like a solid start!

(Oh, and P.S.--the adventure "The Haunting" [based in the '20's but easily adaptable to the '03's] from the CoC 5.5 rulebook is great for a quick--yet scary--adventure, and it's pre-written to save time! --Be seeing you)
 
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That Eskimo story has been inflated a bit. It was originally about 100, now it's 2000.

They also apparently just moved.

I first read about it in a Charles Berlitz book, but after some research, like a lot of things in his book, he kinda exaggerated a bit.

That said, it sounds like a great plot.
 

Wraith Form: I'm pretty sure I can pull it off in one night... there's alot of background information, but it's stuff the PC's won't need to or have to investigate directly. I expect the adventure to involve a bit of time investigating the disease (during that time they'll find out whom the town doctor is), then the realization that he might be experimenting on the villagers. If they go to speak with him a second time, he'll be in the mansion, where things will really get weird (the closer to the Shoggoth they get, the more "odd" events and little strange things tend to happen). Once there they'll come across what's left of Ezra (with some clues to his identity), then finally Joshua (whom if he feels things "closing in on him", will have tried a potent version of his drug). I'm hoping to climax the whole thing by perhaps Joshua trying to get the Shoggoth to assist him and it eating pretty much everything in the mansion (including the PC's if they are inside and the mansion itself).

DM Magic: I really like "Dusk" and "Coldbreak" :) :)

Trancejeremy: Yeah, I assumed there was a perfectly normal explanation... alot of the "odd" stories from that time are pretty thin.
 

i love the idea but...first a few points.

CDC is Centers for Disease Control and Prevention.

we have personnel stationed in Alaska. we have epidemiologists (the people who investigate outbreaks) in all 50 states. Alaska has only 2 though. they are assigned to that state. they(all the epidemiologists) have various degrees to cover various needs. most are mds. but many are phds, dvms, or dentists even. some are economists. and they only act on the state's behalf. they(the state of Alaska) would call for an Epi Aid. which is basically asking for more help. CDC will only investigate an outbreak if invited.

our job includes more than just infectious diseases. the National Center for Infectious Diseases would probably receive this initially. probably from a hospital seeing patients or from an increase in the incidence rate of mental problems in the general populace. it would produce a spike.
 
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Arravis said:
I'm hoping to climax the whole thing by perhaps Joshua trying to get the Shoggoth to assist him and it eating pretty much everything in the mansion (including the PC's if they are inside and the mansion itself).

A Mythos creature eating everything and killing everyone? Then, my god man, you've got such a Lovecraftian story I'm beginning to think maybe you're H.P.'s reincarnation!! :p

[Edited to add a healthy] IAAAEEEE!!! Ftagn Cthulhu!
 
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