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Message: <blockquote data-quote="perrinmiller" data-source="post: 6174694" data-attributes="member: 88649"><img src="http://i956.photobucket.com/albums/ae47/perrinmiller/Plothook/Merchant.jpg" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " data-size="" style="" />Barton Ringling claps his hands twice and smiles at Qalabash."Excellent, excellent, sir. Working cheaply is good, I cannot afford to pay you much."He gestures for the would be sorceress to join them, "Welcome, milady. Arcane arts could be useful indeed."He gives a warm smile for Jericho and says, "Well met, Master Calivaire. Indeed, I am looking for someone that can help me transport something of value safely.  Ha ha, and I am not just talking about my own backside. No sir, har har."The man in the top hat has a hearty laugh and his cheer does not stop when the gnome offers up healing. "Well, I certainly hope we do not need a healer along, but you are still welcome just in case. If I thought there would be no chance of danger, I would not be looking for young heroes to help me."Looking back at Qalabash, "Nothing to forgive, sir. Admiring beauty is only polite." Turning to Trixie, he puts a gold coin one her tray and says, "Milady barmaid, we could use a carafe of wine at the table over there when you get a chance.""Come my ladies and gentlemen. Let me offer you some wine as we converse at the table in the corner. My name is Barton Ringling and I have a little task I need some assistance with." He walks away from the bar towards a table with some privacy in the corner.[Sblock=Recruitment]So far I have 5 (OpMaxBear, Rift, Trisk, GE and SK). I took a quick look  at the latest posts using my phone in the character submissions thread  and I don't see any more realistic possibilities. There are three listed  on the Wiki as being in the DWI, but without ever RPing in the DWI they  will be out of luck. Unless GE wants to level up Qalabash to 3rd to  even out Grayn's adventure, I am ready to proceed with 5. Go ahead and post here: <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/showthread.php?340315-LPF-The-Ringling-Affair" target="_blank">The Ringling Affair</a>OpMaxBear; If  you take a look at what is different, you can see that you missing a  header that includes your character's name and race and you have not  included a picture. Also I tend to have my character's name the first  word written in narration as a matter of form, but that is not always  the case. Please use a differ color for dialog though, I cannot read  that shade of blue on the black background (I have a color blindness  type issue).Other advice: Given that we are using an electronic  medium, generally shorter paragraphs are better for ensuring everything  is easier to read and avoiding that wall of text syndrome. I tend to use  extra line spacing more liberally than most. Rift's paragraphs are too big and hard to read with the bold being used for dialog. With the black background, most of us do not bold speech like on other sites.[/Sblock]</blockquote>

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