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Message: <blockquote data-quote="unleashed" data-source="post: 2793116" data-attributes="member: 31408">Sure no problem I've changed them back, they may not be word perfect but I think they're pretty close (well except I've left some of his added thoughts in the second post as they make sense considering the events he's just seen). Sorry for editing without approval. <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/nervous.png"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":heh:" title="Nervous Laugh    :heh:" data-shortname=":heh:" />Now lets see if I can clear up the reason for the changes for you (the first post, well I have no idea what I was thinking, just a little too enthusiastic to make events fit as I saw them I guess <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/nervous.png"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":heh:" title="Nervous Laugh    :heh:" data-shortname=":heh:" /> ).The problem was that the captain was there all the time Colmarr spoke, so the sequence of events didn't make sense. I expected the captain to effectively repeat Colmarr's question pretty much right after she asked the captain's name, and in the same post. By leaving the captain's response out of the first post it looked like you wanted input from others (which obviously wasn't the case).Thus the reason why I changed my second post to just a thought as your second post was effectively a continuation of the first as it took nothing new into consideration (again like the first post Naomi didn't even register Colmarr speaking with something as simple as turning her head slightly in his direction or a brief nod).Does that make sense?</blockquote>

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