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<blockquote data-quote="Tsillanabor" data-source="post: 3731437" data-attributes="member: 40432"><p>There is now a new beginning to the Trolls and Treachery adventure. I'm also rewriting the other posts-I'll replace them as I get done. Any comments or even (especially in fact) critiques are appreciated-I'm trying to improve my style.</p><p></p><p>EDIT: There is now a newly edited post 4, including new faux-poetry. I think it is better than what was there, but decide for yourselves. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>EDIT AGAIN: There is now a new post 5. I tried to expand the previous exposition, but it didn't work very well. I then tried to transcribe the conversation, but there were too many meta-gaming insults thrown at the household guard. I decided to try the faux-verse and it seemed to work pretty well. I'm somewhat proud of the beginning of the second verse, especially the "rotten wood" line. It is sometimes difficult to force a line into 12 syllables, but those lines really seemed to flow.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Tsillanabor, post: 3731437, member: 40432"] There is now a new beginning to the Trolls and Treachery adventure. I'm also rewriting the other posts-I'll replace them as I get done. Any comments or even (especially in fact) critiques are appreciated-I'm trying to improve my style. EDIT: There is now a newly edited post 4, including new faux-poetry. I think it is better than what was there, but decide for yourselves. :D EDIT AGAIN: There is now a new post 5. I tried to expand the previous exposition, but it didn't work very well. I then tried to transcribe the conversation, but there were too many meta-gaming insults thrown at the household guard. I decided to try the faux-verse and it seemed to work pretty well. I'm somewhat proud of the beginning of the second verse, especially the "rotten wood" line. It is sometimes difficult to force a line into 12 syllables, but those lines really seemed to flow. [/QUOTE]
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