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Message: <blockquote data-quote="The Burned Man" data-source="post: 279632" data-attributes="member: 338">"The citizens of Utalia, indeed, man the Mistresses Navies, Trade her wares, and thanks to an abundance of wood build Her ships. Turrounne, and Utalia in general have come to be known by those of the Kessel, and Red Harbour as the chosen of the lady of the sea. "Are they subjects of the mistress? Vassals or simply venerating her and listening to her advice as a SPIRITUAL ruler, or also as a TEMPORAL ruler."Because of necessity the Utalian navy has become one of the most feared forces of the high seas. Known by outsiders as the Wooden wall the Utalian Navy can at its best show some 120 sails."Do you see the Utali as the great power, a great power or a middle power of the isles?"All humans of the Divine Isles are free, all humans may own land, and no one is guaranteed rights and privileges that are denied to another human under the law."So their more like the Norse (and norse tradition) ie all are equal under the LAW. There is still a nobility by blood or by merit?"Annals of the City"Should there be something about relations with MODERN day power such as the other patrons and the wars they fought?"It is run by an elderly elf named Cathaise Myt'haern, a beloved grand fatherly figure of the Mistress when she was younger."So he´s 1600+ years old. "and officer evaluations for Turrounne and Irrasibon."Are these the same. You´d have to clarify the political situation here?"Angered at his father for swearing allegiance to Irrasibon, and the Commoner’s Mistress"Okay. Vassalage, that makes sense. (or somesuch) Nice Plot-hook."Arguably the most outspoken of the Counsel, Thorridan has served regularly as a Commander of the Utalian Armies under the Lord of the Blades, and the Lord Protector along the Serewail"Yes. I´ve always believed that the LoB and LP use auxillaries from the Kessel and other kingdoms who wish to incur their favour (and avoid the wrath of the LoB)."He currently flies his flag over the 100 gunned "Canons, Clockwork canons?"For Celestial deer war might anger his primitive gods. He constantly threatens to leave the counsel forever to their own destruction if they do not listen to his words, and obey the Reu Ammanor. He is joined in the counsel by the Oslandyis Wildling female, Takafaelan Leijnaigt, or Listening tree."But their gods dont exist? Maybe a cosmological statement here?"He is without question the most feared man in all of the Isles. He alone is responsible for the philosophy behind the Inquisitors, and serves as the leader from his chambers at Pentacle Castle"Who do the inquisitors serve and where do they gain their authority? If religious it sound more like a servan of LoB or LP (paladin) or independent.----------Overall I like the text. Its a average nation of the isles (with 150000 inhabitants, getting most of its wealth from trade)</blockquote>

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