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<blockquote data-quote="Dungannon" data-source="post: 3265874" data-attributes="member: 8169">Geez, I can't believe I just found this storyhour.&nbsp; You need a new VP of Advertising Lazybones, your current one sucks. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f61b.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":p" title="Stick out tongue&nbsp; &nbsp; :p"&nbsp; data-smilie="7"data-shortname=":p" />&nbsp; It took me two days to read all nine pages, but I've finally finished and all I can say is DAMN!Okay, I can say a lot more than that. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp; This is my favorite of your three storyhours so far, the characters are more, I don't know, real? vibrant? believable?&nbsp; Anyway, your writing has done nothing but get better and better since you started years ago with a chance meeting at a crossroads of four disparate souls.On to the story itself.&nbsp; Rappan Athuk is a badass dungeon, I may have to throw it into the homebrew I'm building.&nbsp; Killing the half-orc right away was a bit of a shock, but it fit the story and really highlighted the deadliness of the place.&nbsp; I liked the improvised spiked chain you gave him, too. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp;&nbsp; I knew the warlock was doomed from the start.&nbsp; I mean c'mon, he was an arcane caster and his signature color was red!&nbsp; And the reinforcements you sent, my lord man.&nbsp; Who would've thought that, in a LB story, the dwarf would die before the clerics?!And as for Book II, of course Dar is &quot;the general&quot;.&nbsp; I mean Dar, Varo, and the Mad Elf are the last of the original Doomed Bastards, it's only fitting that they be the ones to fulfill the prophecy.Good writing and I look forward to the next update!</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Dungannon, post: 3265874, member: 8169"] Geez, I can't believe I just found this storyhour. You need a new VP of Advertising Lazybones, your current one sucks. :p It took me two days to read all nine pages, but I've finally finished and all I can say is DAMN! Okay, I can say a lot more than that. :) This is my favorite of your three storyhours so far, the characters are more, I don't know, real? vibrant? believable? Anyway, your writing has done nothing but get better and better since you started years ago with a chance meeting at a crossroads of four disparate souls. On to the story itself. Rappan Athuk is a [i]badass[/i] dungeon, I may have to throw it into the homebrew I'm building. Killing the half-orc right away was a bit of a shock, but it fit the story and really highlighted the deadliness of the place. I liked the improvised spiked chain you gave him, too. :) I knew the warlock was doomed from the start. I mean c'mon, he was an arcane caster [i]and[/i] his signature color was red! And the reinforcements you sent, my lord man. Who would've thought that, in a LB story, the dwarf would die before the clerics?! And as for Book II, [i]of course[/i] Dar is "the general". I mean Dar, Varo, and the Mad Elf are the last of the original Doomed Bastards, it's only fitting that they be the ones to fulfill the prophecy. Good writing and I look forward to the next update! [/QUOTE]

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