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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Cerulean_Wings" data-source="post: 4013244" data-attributes="member: 55060">I caught up... to page 28! Only 10 more pages to read of good ol' meat-grinder business!  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin    :D"  data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" /> Lazybones, you started with it, and 3 Books later, you still got it. Whatever it is, it draws me into the story, the characters, and the gruesome battles, without letting go. Please don't stop writing, or the souls of countless readers will feel empty and forsaken  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" /> If I had to choose the best moment of Book 3, it would have to be Dar's talk with Kalend, telling him to man up and be strong 'till the end. Very inspiring!All of that praise being said, there's one little thingy that bugs me: modern expressions. Mostly, it's Dar using them, and while they sound cool and all, I don't think they mesh well with the medieval-fantasy setting they're in. Sure, Dar is the type of character who, in modern times, would say stuff like "effing awesome!", but I just don't feel like it goes well with the world they're in. Just my two copper on the matter, it's not a huge issue for me.</blockquote>

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