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<blockquote data-quote="Legildur" data-source="post: 1831531" data-attributes="member: 1258">Changed one feat.&nbsp; I will develop description tonight.&nbsp; I'm unsure about Deity and languages and you may need to adjust those.[CODE][B]Name:[/B] Makas[B]Class:[/B] Bbr1/Ftr1[B]Race:[/B] Dwarf[B]Size:[/B] Medium[B]Gender:[/B] Male[B]Alignment:[/B] Neutral Good[B]Deity:[/B] Moradin[B]Str:[/B] 16 +3 (10p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Level:[/B] 2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [B]XP:[/B] 2000[B]Dex:[/B] 13 +1&nbsp; (5p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]BAB:[/B] +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]HP:[/B] 24 (2d12+6)[B]Con:[/B] 16 +3&nbsp; (6p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Grapple:[/B] +5&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Dmg Red:[/B] -/-[B]Int:[/B] 14 +2&nbsp; (6p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Speed:[/B] 30'&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [B]Spell Res:[/B] -[B]Wis:[/B] 12 +1&nbsp; (4p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Init:[/B] +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [B]Poison/Spell Save:[/B] +2[B]Cha:[/B]&nbsp; 7 -2&nbsp; (1p.)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]ACP:[/B] -6&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Spell Fail:[/B] -&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Base&nbsp; Armor Shld&nbsp;&nbsp; Dex&nbsp; Size&nbsp;&nbsp; Nat&nbsp; Misc&nbsp; Total[/B][B]Armor:[/B]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 10&nbsp; &nbsp; +5&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; +0&nbsp; &nbsp; 18[B]Touch:[/B] 11&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [B]Flatfooted:[/B] 17&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Base&nbsp;&nbsp; Mod&nbsp; Misc&nbsp; Total[/B][B]Fort:[/B]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +7[B]Ref:[/B]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +1[B]Will:[/B]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +1[B]Weapon&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Attack&nbsp;&nbsp; Damage&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Critical[/B]dwarven waraxe&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +7&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1d10+3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20x3throwing axe&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1d6+3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 20x2sling&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1d4+3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 20x2[B]Languages:[/B] Common, Dwarven, Terran, Undercommon.[B]Abilities:[/B] Darkvision 60ft, Stonecunning, Weapon familiarity, Stability,+2 racial bonus against poison, spells, and spell-like effects, +1 racialbonus on attack rolls against orcs and goblinoids, +4 Dodge bonus to ACagainst giant types, +2 racial bonus to Appraise and craft checks forstone and metal, proficient with all simple and martial weapons, and withall armor (light, medium, and heavy armor) and all shields (including towershields), Fast Movement (Ex), Rage 1/day (Ex), Axe Focus (Ex).[B]Feats:[/B] Axe Focus, Endurance.[B]Skill Points:[/B] 28&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Max Ranks:[/B] 5/2.5[B]Skills&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Ranks&nbsp; Mod&nbsp; Misc&nbsp; Total[/B]Appraise (stone &amp; metal)&nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +4Climb&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +6Craft (weaponsmithing)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +7Heal (cc)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3Knowledge (dungeoneering)&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +6Jump&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +6Listen&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 3&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +4Search (stonework)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +2&nbsp; &nbsp; +4Spot (cc)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +3Survival&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp; &nbsp; +1&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; +5Swim&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp; &nbsp; +3&nbsp;&nbsp; -12&nbsp; &nbsp; -9[B]Equipment:&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Cost&nbsp; Weight[/B]Dwarvencraft Waraxe&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 630gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 8lbSling&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 0lbSling bullets (10)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1sp&nbsp; &nbsp; 5lbThrowing Axe&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 8gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 2lbBreastplate&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 200gp&nbsp;&nbsp; 30lbHeavy steel shield&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 20gp&nbsp;&nbsp; 15lbBackpack&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 2lbBedroll&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1sp&nbsp; &nbsp; 5lbGrappling hook&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 4lbHammer&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 5sp&nbsp; &nbsp; 2lb10 pitons&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 5lbBelt pouch&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 1gp&nbsp; 0.5lb100ft silk rope&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 20gp&nbsp;&nbsp; 10lbWaterskin&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 4lbWhetstone&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2cp&nbsp; &nbsp; 1lbExplorer's outfit&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 0gp&nbsp; &nbsp; 0lb[B]Total Weight:[/B]93.5lb&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [B]Money:[/B] 15gp 2sp 8cp&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [B]Lgt&nbsp;&nbsp; Med&nbsp;&nbsp; Hvy&nbsp; Lift&nbsp; Push[/B][B]Max Weight:[/B]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 76&nbsp;&nbsp; 153&nbsp;&nbsp; 230&nbsp;&nbsp; 230&nbsp;&nbsp; 1150[B]Age:[/B] 54[B]Height:[/B] 4'3&quot;[B]Weight:[/B] 180lb[B]Eyes:[/B] brown[B]Hair:[/B] brown[B]Skin:[/B] deep tan[/CODE]Appearance: XXXXBackground: Makas spent much of his adolescence exploring his homeland and some of the deeper cave systems.&nbsp; Though, being slightly short of temper and not overly popular at the best of times, much of this was carried out in isolation.&nbsp; As his ability and confidence grew, he gradually ranged farther from home and learned more of the deeper cave systems, often encountering some of the longer range reconaissance patrols of his homeland.&nbsp; Some of these patrols even took him along and taught him how to use the weapons and armor familiar to all dwarves.&nbsp; He took a particular liking to the waraxe, admiring it's shape, style and the damage it could deal out in trained hands.One unfortunate event turned his life upside down.&nbsp; Makas convinced a small group of friends, including a cousin, to join him exploring a distant cave system.&nbsp; To reach it required some overland travel.&nbsp; A day out from Mornal, the group was ambushed by some Axyrian traders seeking to capture some dwarven slaves.&nbsp; Outnumbered and with no chance to fight their way out, Makas chose to flee in order to tell what happened.&nbsp; He did not see enough to know whether the rest of the group perished or was captured.On return to Mornal, he was held to blame for leading the others astray.&nbsp; The recriminations from even his own family and his own guilt grew too strong and he chose to leave his home city rather than live as an outsider amongst his own people.&nbsp; In his own mind he had some ridiculous notion of freeing those friends who may have been captured and exacting a bloody revenge on the traders.&nbsp; But without any real knowledge of what he was seeking, Makas left some days later without a word.A great uncle, a weaponsmith, obviously guessed what he intended and intercepted him as he sort to leave the city. And without a single word being said, he gave to Makas a fine dwarvencraft waraxe to hang on his back.Knowing only that the description of his attackers branded them as Axyrian traders, Makas set out for the great city of Axir.&nbsp; In all, his travels took him across 400 miles of desert passing through the city of Al Arhaq where he spent a time as a smith's assistant.&nbsp; His encounters were generally neither overly exciting or dangerous.&nbsp; However, one enounter with two bandits near the Hill of Vengor did allow him to blood the gifted waraxe and resulted in a gashed calf on his right leg that has left him with a slight limp, but in much better shape than the bandits.Finally Makas reached Axir.&nbsp; Though very unsure about his next steps.&nbsp; He is currently resting at the Sleeping Swordfish hoping that fate will lend a hand.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Legildur, post: 1831531, member: 1258"] Changed one feat. I will develop description tonight. I'm unsure about Deity and languages and you may need to adjust those. [CODE][B]Name:[/B] Makas [B]Class:[/B] Bbr1/Ftr1 [B]Race:[/B] Dwarf [B]Size:[/B] Medium [B]Gender:[/B] Male [B]Alignment:[/B] Neutral Good [B]Deity:[/B] Moradin [B]Str:[/B] 16 +3 (10p.) [B]Level:[/B] 2 [B]XP:[/B] 2000 [B]Dex:[/B] 13 +1 (5p.) [B]BAB:[/B] +2 [B]HP:[/B] 24 (2d12+6) [B]Con:[/B] 16 +3 (6p.) [B]Grapple:[/B] +5 [B]Dmg Red:[/B] -/- [B]Int:[/B] 14 +2 (6p.) [B]Speed:[/B] 30' [B]Spell Res:[/B] - [B]Wis:[/B] 12 +1 (4p.) [B]Init:[/B] +1 [B]Poison/Spell Save:[/B] +2 [B]Cha:[/B] 7 -2 (1p.) [B]ACP:[/B] -6 [B]Spell Fail:[/B] - [B]Base Armor Shld Dex Size Nat Misc Total[/B] [B]Armor:[/B] 10 +5 +2 +1 +0 +0 +0 18 [B]Touch:[/B] 11 [B]Flatfooted:[/B] 17 [B]Base Mod Misc Total[/B] [B]Fort:[/B] 4 +3 +7 [B]Ref:[/B] 0 +1 +1 [B]Will:[/B] 0 +1 +1 [B]Weapon Attack Damage Critical[/B] dwarven waraxe +7 1d10+3 20x3 throwing axe +3 1d6+3 20x2 sling +3 1d4+3 20x2 [B]Languages:[/B] Common, Dwarven, Terran, Undercommon. [B]Abilities:[/B] Darkvision 60ft, Stonecunning, Weapon familiarity, Stability, +2 racial bonus against poison, spells, and spell-like effects, +1 racial bonus on attack rolls against orcs and goblinoids, +4 Dodge bonus to AC against giant types, +2 racial bonus to Appraise and craft checks for stone and metal, proficient with all simple and martial weapons, and with all armor (light, medium, and heavy armor) and all shields (including tower shields), Fast Movement (Ex), Rage 1/day (Ex), Axe Focus (Ex). [B]Feats:[/B] Axe Focus, Endurance. [B]Skill Points:[/B] 28 [B]Max Ranks:[/B] 5/2.5 [B]Skills Ranks Mod Misc Total[/B] Appraise (stone & metal) 0 +2 +2 +4 Climb 3 +3 +6 Craft (weaponsmithing) 3 +2 +2 +7 Heal (cc) 2 +1 +3 Knowledge (dungeoneering) 4 +2 +6 Jump 3 +3 +6 Listen 3 +1 +4 Search (stonework) 0 +2 +2 +4 Spot (cc) 2 +1 +3 Survival 4 +1 +5 Swim 0 +3 -12 -9 [B]Equipment: Cost Weight[/B] Dwarvencraft Waraxe 630gp 8lb Sling 0gp 0lb Sling bullets (10) 1sp 5lb Throwing Axe 8gp 2lb Breastplate 200gp 30lb Heavy steel shield 20gp 15lb Backpack 2gp 2lb Bedroll 1sp 5lb Grappling hook 1gp 4lb Hammer 5sp 2lb 10 pitons 1gp 5lb Belt pouch 1gp 0.5lb 100ft silk rope 20gp 10lb Waterskin 1gp 4lb Whetstone 2cp 1lb Explorer's outfit 0gp 0lb [B]Total Weight:[/B]93.5lb [B]Money:[/B] 15gp 2sp 8cp [B]Lgt Med Hvy Lift Push[/B] [B]Max Weight:[/B] 76 153 230 230 1150 [B]Age:[/B] 54 [B]Height:[/B] 4'3" [B]Weight:[/B] 180lb [B]Eyes:[/B] brown [B]Hair:[/B] brown [B]Skin:[/B] deep tan[/CODE] [B]Appearance:[/B] XXXX [B]Background:[/B] Makas spent much of his adolescence exploring his homeland and some of the deeper cave systems. Though, being slightly short of temper and not overly popular at the best of times, much of this was carried out in isolation. As his ability and confidence grew, he gradually ranged farther from home and learned more of the deeper cave systems, often encountering some of the longer range reconaissance patrols of his homeland. Some of these patrols even took him along and taught him how to use the weapons and armor familiar to all dwarves. He took a particular liking to the waraxe, admiring it's shape, style and the damage it could deal out in trained hands. One unfortunate event turned his life upside down. Makas convinced a small group of friends, including a cousin, to join him exploring a distant cave system. To reach it required some overland travel. A day out from Mornal, the group was ambushed by some Axyrian traders seeking to capture some dwarven slaves. Outnumbered and with no chance to fight their way out, Makas chose to flee in order to tell what happened. He did not see enough to know whether the rest of the group perished or was captured. On return to Mornal, he was held to blame for leading the others astray. The recriminations from even his own family and his own guilt grew too strong and he chose to leave his home city rather than live as an outsider amongst his own people. In his own mind he had some ridiculous notion of freeing those friends who may have been captured and exacting a bloody revenge on the traders. But without any real knowledge of what he was seeking, Makas left some days later without a word. A great uncle, a weaponsmith, obviously guessed what he intended and intercepted him as he sort to leave the city. And without a single word being said, he gave to Makas a fine dwarvencraft waraxe to hang on his back. Knowing only that the description of his attackers branded them as Axyrian traders, Makas set out for the great city of Axir. In all, his travels took him across 400 miles of desert passing through the city of Al Arhaq where he spent a time as a smith's assistant. His encounters were generally neither overly exciting or dangerous. However, one enounter with two bandits near the Hill of Vengor did allow him to blood the gifted waraxe and resulted in a gashed calf on his right leg that has left him with a slight limp, but in much better shape than the bandits. Finally Makas reached Axir. Though very unsure about his next steps. He is currently resting at the Sleeping Swordfish hoping that fate will lend a hand. [/QUOTE]

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