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<blockquote data-quote="Nonlethal Force" data-source="post: 3118183" data-attributes="member: 35788">She smiles and gives him a quick kissing motion with her lips before leaving to retrieve the ale that had been ordered.Badrick smiles in the woman's direction and shifts - as though he were suddenly needing to change his position.&nbsp; &quot;Now that's what I call a serving wench.&nbsp; One of the main reasons why I come here whenever we be in port.&quot;Merrick adds, &quot;And one of the reasons you still be single, too!&quot;The trio have a good laugh before turning to Aekalos and starting the business.&nbsp; Merrick adds, &quot;So what do you want to know, lad?&quot;[Sblock=OOC]Bah.&nbsp; For some reason I'm really struggling of late with my tense.&nbsp; I think it is the narrative at the beginning that is throwing me off.&nbsp; I write my Story Hour from a third person omniscient frame of reference thus I typically use the simple past as my standard verb tense.&nbsp; Here in this thread I haven't yet found my groove.&nbsp; I think I normally use present in Clutches of Evil, no?Anyway, forgive my change of tenses in my posting.&nbsp; I'll eventually get it ironed out.[/Sblock]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Nonlethal Force, post: 3118183, member: 35788"] She smiles and gives him a quick kissing motion with her lips before leaving to retrieve the ale that had been ordered. Badrick smiles in the woman's direction and shifts - as though he were suddenly needing to change his position. [COLOR=Lime]"Now that's what I call a serving wench. One of the main reasons why I come here whenever we be in port."[/COLOR] Merrick adds, [COLOR=Lime]"And one of the reasons you still be single, too!"[/COLOR] The trio have a good laugh before turning to Aekalos and starting the business. Merrick adds, [COLOR=Lime]"So what do you want to know, lad?"[/COLOR] [Sblock=OOC]Bah. For some reason I'm really struggling of late with my tense. I think it is the narrative at the beginning that is throwing me off. I write my Story Hour from a third person omniscient frame of reference thus I typically use the simple past as my standard verb tense. Here in this thread I haven't yet found my groove. I think I normally use present in Clutches of Evil, no? Anyway, forgive my change of tenses in my posting. I'll eventually get it ironed out.[/Sblock] [/QUOTE]

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