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<blockquote data-quote="Erratic K" data-source="post: 1148884" data-attributes="member: 14360">I suggest not insulting your target audience.&nbsp; Ponder the wisdom of some trite truisms like &quot;you catch more flies with honey than vinegar&quot; or &quot;don't bite the hand that feeds you&quot;.&nbsp; &nbsp; I also suggest posting it in the story hour forum.&nbsp; Before you do, read some of the other story hours (Piratecat's or somebodies).&nbsp; Then write it up in installments that are better written and more comprehensible to an outsider. You may need to include more detail.&nbsp; You'll get more vistitors and input there.&nbsp; It doesn't have to be terribly long.&nbsp; You need to make the story a little more fleshed out so we can tell who the party is and what they are doing.I can't respond to anything else because my attention span is too short.&nbsp; I might have also been trolled, but I don't care.-Erratic KPardon me if English is not your first language.&nbsp; It is not mine either.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Erratic K, post: 1148884, member: 14360"] I suggest not insulting your target audience. Ponder the wisdom of some trite truisms like "you catch more flies with honey than vinegar" or "don't bite the hand that feeds you". I also suggest posting it in the story hour forum. Before you do, read some of the other story hours (Piratecat's or somebodies). Then write it up in installments that are better written and more comprehensible to an outsider. You may need to include more detail. You'll get more vistitors and input there. It doesn't have to be terribly long. You need to make the story a little more fleshed out so we can tell who the party is and what they are doing. I can't respond to anything else because my attention span is too short. I might have also been trolled, but I don't care. -Erratic K Pardon me if English is not your first language. It is not mine either. [/QUOTE]

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