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<blockquote data-quote="gabrion" data-source="post: 2661574" data-attributes="member: 30779"><p>Ok everyone, I spent some time going over characters and it looks like everyone did a pretty good job except from some formatting things I need. This little bit is for everyone, and I handle individual stuff below.</p><p></p><p>I need all of you to break numbers down into their components and listed things in a vertical format. If you don’t know what I mean, take a look at this sample character sheet. You don’t have to use it (since everyone has a different format already), but look how each character stat lists all of the components that go into it (for instance AC has every modifier listed out). Also, almost everything is arranged in vertical lists (take a look at feats for instance). Make sure once again that you list the sources for anything that is not core. </p><p></p><p>If you do want to use anything sections from this character sheet, be sure to quote this post and then copy the information out of the text box. That way you will get all of the coding, whereas copying it straight from the thread won’t do that. </p><p></p><p><strong>Sample Character Sheet:</strong></p><p>[sblock] <span style="font-size: 12px"><u><strong>Character Name</strong></u></span></p><p>Gender and Race</p><p>Class(es) and Level(s)</p><p>Alignment</p><p>Deity, if appropriate</p><p></p><p>Height, Weight, Age</p><p>Hair color, Eye color, Skin color</p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Str ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Dex ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Con ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Int ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Wis ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Courier New'"><strong>Cha ??</strong> (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)</span></p><p><em>Hit Points:</em> ?? (fixed/rolled)</p><p><em>AC:</em> ??, <em>Touch:</em> ??, <em>Flatfooted:</em> ??</p><p><em>Initiative:</em> +?</p><p><em>BAB:</em> +?, <em>Grapple:</em> +?</p><p><em>Speed:</em> ?? feet (base ??, light/medium/heavy load [?? of ?? lbs], light/medium/heavy armor)</p><p></p><p><u><strong>Saves</strong></u> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Fort:</em> +? (+? class, +? class, +? con, +? feat, +? special, etc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Ref:</em> +? (+? class, +? class, +? dex, +? feat, +? special, etc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Will:</em> +? (+? class, +? class, +? wis, +? feat, +? special, etc)</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Attacks</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+?/+?/+? melee, weapon, ?d?+?, ??-??/x?</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+?/+?/+? ranged, weapon, ?d?+?, ??-??/x?, ?' range</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Skills</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Skill Name +? (? ranks, +? ability, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Skill Name +? (? ranks, +? ability, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Listen +? (? ranks, +? wis, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spot +? (? ranks, +? wis, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Speaks Common, Racial, etc. (? ranks in Speak Language)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>Armor Check Penalty:</em> -? (-? armor, -? shield)</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Feats</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Feat Name (Level 1 - Race)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Feat Name (Level ? - Class ?)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Feat Name (Level 1 - Character)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Feat Name (Level 3 - Character)</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Racial Traits</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Size</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Ability Modifiers</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Base Speed</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Skill Bonuses</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Miscellaneous, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Favored Class</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Special Abilities</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Special Ability Name (Class ?)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Special Abilitiy Name (Class ?), etc</li> </ul><p><u><strong>Caster Levels</strong>:</u> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">CL ?? "Class Name"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">CL ?? "Class Name", etc</li> </ul><p><strong><u>"Class Name" Spells Prepared</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>Cantrips</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>1st Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>2nd Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>3rd Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>4th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>5th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>6th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>7th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>8th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>9th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc</li> </ul><p><strong><u>"Class Name" Spells Cast per Day and Spells Known</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>Cantrips</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>1st Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>2nd Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>3rd Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>4th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>5th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>6th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>7th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>8th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>9th Level</u>:</em> ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc</li> </ul><p><u><strong>Manifester Levels</strong>:</u> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">ML ?? "Class Name"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">ML ?? "Class Name", etc</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Power Points per Day</u>:</strong>: ?? Power Points per day (+x class y, +x for ability of z, +x class y, +x for ability of z, +x feat, +x race, +x misc)</p><p><strong><u>"Class Name" Powers Known</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>1st Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>2nd Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>3rd Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>4th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>5th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>6th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>7th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>8th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em><u>9th Level</u>:</em> Power Name, Power Name, etc</li> </ul><p><strong><u>Equipment</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Melee Weapon (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Ranged Weapon (weight)<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Ammunition Type I (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Ammunition Type II, etc (weight)</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Armor (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Shield (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Outfit (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Storage Item (weight)<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Stowed Item (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Stowed Item (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spellbook(s), if applicable (weight)<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Cantrips<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (½ page)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (½ page), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 1<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (1 page)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (1 page), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 2<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (2 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (2 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 3<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (3 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (3 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 4<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (4 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (4 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 5<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (5 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (5 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 6<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (6 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (6 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 7<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (7 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (7 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 8<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (8 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (8 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Level 9<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (9 pages)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Spell Name (9 pages), etc</li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Blank Pages: ??</li> </ul></li> </ul></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Miscellaneous Item (weight)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Miscellaneous Item (weight), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">?? Platinum Pieces, ?? Gold Pieces, ?? Silver Pieces, ?? Copper Pieces (weight [1 lb/50 coins])</li> </ul><p><u><strong>Items Bought</strong></u>[SBLOCK] <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price bought at)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price bought at)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price bought at), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>[OVERLINE]Total Value of Bought Items[/OVERLINE]</strong></li> </ul><p>[/SBLOCK]</p><p></p><p><u><strong>Items Sold</strong></u>[SBLOCK] <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price sold at)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price sold at)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Name (price sold at), etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>[OVERLINE]Total Value of Sold Items[/OVERLINE]</strong></li> </ul><p>[/SBLOCK]</p><p><u><strong>Awards</strong></u>[SBLOCK]<strong><u>Experience Awards</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? experience points</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? experience points</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? experience points, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>[OVERLINE]Total Value of Experience Awards: +? experience points[/OVERLINE]</strong></li> </ul><p></p><p><strong><u>Monetary Awards</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? gold pieces</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? gold pieces</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">+? gold pieces, etc</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>[OVERLINE]Total Value of Monetary Awards: +? gold pieces[/OVERLINE]</strong></li> </ul><p></p><p><strong><u>Item Awards</u></strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Award</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Award</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Item Award, etc</li> </ul><p>[/SBLOCK]</p><p><strong><u>Background</u></strong><p style="margin-left: 20px"><em>Character Background Here</em></p><p>[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>I’ve gone over each character individually and listed out concerns here. I repeat the comments above (about breaking down numbers) a lot, but that’s just cause it is a pet peeve of mine and I want it done for all the characters. </p><p></p><p>I didn’t add up equipment value yet, but I will when I get another spare minute. Try to double check things like that (if you already have then thanks) so as to save me a little work.</p><p></p><p>Also, I will need to go over these things one more time after all of the stats have been listed out properly. With that out of the way, here we go…</p><p></p><p><strong>GSFRumble</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">List enhancement in front of weapon whenever it appears on your sheet. For instance, your attacks should say “+2 Maul +18/+13.” </li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Your full attack should indicate that the +16/+11 is for your primary weapon and the other +16 is for the off hand. Right now it looks like your full attack includes 3 attacks with a maul or three attacks with a throwing hammer. Clarify this please.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Special attacks and qualities should list their source (whether it is race, class, feat, etc). </li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I would prefer if you listed feats and skills in a vertical list (abilities, special attacks, special qualities, and saves would be nice in this format as well).</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">As noted above, ability scores and skills should list all internal components.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Your weapons only include the cost of the magical enhancement. You need to add on the base cost for the masterwork weapon.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">On a note unrelated to technical issues, have you considered using a persistent divine power theme through divine Metamagic? Upping your BAB by 2 (thus granting another attack), Str by 6 and giving you anther 12 HP is always nice.</li> </ul><p>Note: I will look over your character again when you have broken down the numbers. Right now it is all but impossible to know if your skill point calculations are right, but let me know when you have listed the relevant modifiers and I will take another look.</p><p></p><p><strong>Someone</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">After your ability scores, you should include all the appropriate modifiers that add to the base to reach the final score.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">This may be my fault, but I’m a little confused about your attacks. I’m guessing the first attack (+21) is if you attack just once in a round as a standard action. The two progressions listed below that (+19/+19/+14/+9 and +19/+14/+9) are supposed to represent the primary and off-hand attacks for a full-attack round right? If you could break those numbers down I would appreciate it. As far as I can tell they are correct, but I’d like to see the breakdown listed on your sheet.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">If you have a familiar it would be good to specify that under the wizard class features (you have the ability list, but no familiar or benefit).</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Ride should be +16.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I like your contingency. </li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Your double sword should be 21,100 by my calculations (you have the XP cost right though).</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">A minor thing, but could you move the descriptive stats (age, height, etc) to the top?</li> </ul><p></p><p><strong>kyonip</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Weapons should have their enhancement bonus and/or special abilities as part of their name wherever they appear.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">HP should have a breakdown by hit dice.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Skill points should list the number you get from each class.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">It would be nice if the special abilities from classes/race were listed in a vertical format under each source.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Non-core items should list their source (actually anything non-core should).</li> </ul><p></p><p><strong>Shayuri</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down ability scores.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down HP.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down attacks.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down saves.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">List how many skill points you get from each class (but you did a fine job of listing out the skills themselves).</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Generally speaking the character looks fine, but I would like you to show the break down for the numbers.</li> </ul><p></p><p><strong>Erudite</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down ability scores.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down attacks and damage.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Could you put your feats in the order they were taken instead of alphabetical?</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">For some skills you list ability modifier (sense motive for instance), but other ones you don’t. I would prefer that you list it for all skills.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">You listed the Great Swordbow as costing 8,300, but in RotW it costs 7,150. Is there something else about it that I’m missing?</li> </ul><p></p><p><strong>Rystil</strong> <ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">You haven’t listed you HP, which should be 85 if I’ve added them up correctly.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Break down your saves.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I would say break down your attacks, but I really don’t care. </li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">The number of skills from each class would be helpful.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Somewhere on your sheet you should list money spent and current funds available.</li> </ul><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Ok folks, if you would kindly address these things and post a reply when you have done so, I would appreciate it. If I’ve made a mistake somewhere above (which is likely the case), be sure to point that out to so I can take another look.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="gabrion, post: 2661574, member: 30779"] Ok everyone, I spent some time going over characters and it looks like everyone did a pretty good job except from some formatting things I need. This little bit is for everyone, and I handle individual stuff below. I need all of you to break numbers down into their components and listed things in a vertical format. If you don’t know what I mean, take a look at this sample character sheet. You don’t have to use it (since everyone has a different format already), but look how each character stat lists all of the components that go into it (for instance AC has every modifier listed out). Also, almost everything is arranged in vertical lists (take a look at feats for instance). Make sure once again that you list the sources for anything that is not core. If you do want to use anything sections from this character sheet, be sure to quote this post and then copy the information out of the text box. That way you will get all of the coding, whereas copying it straight from the thread won’t do that. [B]Sample Character Sheet:[/B] [sblock] [SIZE=3][U][B]Character Name[/B][/U][/SIZE] Gender and Race Class(es) and Level(s) Alignment Deity, if appropriate Height, Weight, Age Hair color, Eye color, Skin color [FONT=Courier New][B]Str ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc) [B]Dex ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc) [B]Con ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc) [B]Int ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc) [B]Wis ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc) [B]Cha ??[/B] (+?) (?? points if appropriate, +? racial, +? levels, +? item, etc)[/FONT] [I]Hit Points:[/I] ?? (fixed/rolled) [I]AC:[/I] ??, [I]Touch:[/I] ??, [I]Flatfooted:[/I] ?? [I]Initiative:[/I] +? [I]BAB:[/I] +?, [I]Grapple:[/I] +? [I]Speed:[/I] ?? feet (base ??, light/medium/heavy load [?? of ?? lbs], light/medium/heavy armor) [U][B]Saves[/B][/U][list][*][I]Fort:[/I] +? (+? class, +? class, +? con, +? feat, +? special, etc) [*][I]Ref:[/I] +? (+? class, +? class, +? dex, +? feat, +? special, etc) [*][I]Will:[/I] +? (+? class, +? class, +? wis, +? feat, +? special, etc)[/list] [B][U]Attacks[/U][/B][list][*]+?/+?/+? melee, weapon, ?d?+?, ??-??/x? [*]+?/+?/+? ranged, weapon, ?d?+?, ??-??/x?, ?' range[/list] [B][U]Skills[/U][/B][list][*]Skill Name +? (? ranks, +? ability, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc) [*]Skill Name +? (? ranks, +? ability, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc) [*]Listen +? (? ranks, +? wis, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc) [*]Spot +? (? ranks, +? wis, +? racial, +? synergy, +? item, +? feat, +? misc) [*]Speaks Common, Racial, etc. (? ranks in Speak Language) [*][I]Armor Check Penalty:[/I] -? (-? armor, -? shield)[/list] [B][U]Feats[/U][/B][list][*]Feat Name (Level 1 - Race) [*]Feat Name (Level ? - Class ?) [*]Feat Name (Level 1 - Character) [*]Feat Name (Level 3 - Character)[/list] [B][U]Racial Traits[/U][/B][list][*]Size [*]Ability Modifiers [*]Base Speed [*]Skill Bonuses [*]Miscellaneous, etc [*]Favored Class[/list] [B][U]Special Abilities[/U][/B][list][*]Special Ability Name (Class ?) [*]Special Abilitiy Name (Class ?), etc[/list] [U][B]Caster Levels[/B]:[/U][list][*]CL ?? "Class Name" [*]CL ?? "Class Name", etc[/list] [B][U]"Class Name" Spells Prepared[/U][/B][list][*][I][U]Cantrips[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?) [*][I][U]1st Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]2nd Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]3rd Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]4th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]5th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]6th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]7th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]8th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc [*][I][U]9th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name (?), Spell Name (?), etc[/list] [B][U]"Class Name" Spells Cast per Day and Spells Known[/U][/B][list][*][I][U]Cantrips[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]1st Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]2nd Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]3rd Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]4th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]5th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]6th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]7th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]8th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc [*][I][U]9th Level[/U]:[/I] ?/day, Spell Name, Spell Name, etc[/list] [U][B]Manifester Levels[/B]:[/U][list][*]ML ?? "Class Name" [*]ML ?? "Class Name", etc[/list] [B][U]Power Points per Day[/U]:[/B]: ?? Power Points per day (+x class y, +x for ability of z, +x class y, +x for ability of z, +x feat, +x race, +x misc) [B][U]"Class Name" Powers Known[/U][/B][list][*][I][U]1st Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]2nd Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]3rd Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]4th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]5th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]6th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]7th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]8th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc [*][I][U]9th Level[/U]:[/I] Power Name, Power Name, etc[/list] [B][U]Equipment[/U][/B][list][*]Melee Weapon (weight) [*]Ranged Weapon (weight)[list] [*]Ammunition Type I (weight) [*]Ammunition Type II, etc (weight)[/list] [*]Armor (weight) [*]Shield (weight) [*]Outfit (weight) [*]Storage Item (weight)[list][*]Stowed Item (weight) [*]Stowed Item (weight) [*][*]Spellbook(s), if applicable (weight)[list][*]Cantrips[list][*]Spell Name (½ page) [*]Spell Name (½ page), etc[/list] [*]Level 1[list] [*]Spell Name (1 page) [*]Spell Name (1 page), etc[/list] [*]Level 2[list] [*]Spell Name (2 pages) [*]Spell Name (2 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 3[list] [*]Spell Name (3 pages) [*]Spell Name (3 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 4[list] [*]Spell Name (4 pages) [*]Spell Name (4 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 5[list] [*]Spell Name (5 pages) [*]Spell Name (5 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 6[list] [*]Spell Name (6 pages) [*]Spell Name (6 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 7[list] [*]Spell Name (7 pages) [*]Spell Name (7 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 8[list] [*]Spell Name (8 pages) [*]Spell Name (8 pages), etc[/list] [*]Level 9[list] [*]Spell Name (9 pages) [*]Spell Name (9 pages), etc[/list] [*]Blank Pages: ??[/list][/list] [*]Miscellaneous Item (weight) [*]Miscellaneous Item (weight), etc [*]?? Platinum Pieces, ?? Gold Pieces, ?? Silver Pieces, ?? Copper Pieces (weight [1 lb/50 coins])[/list] [U][B]Items Bought[/B][/U][SBLOCK][list][*]Item Name (price bought at) [*]Item Name (price bought at) [*]Item Name (price bought at), etc [*][B][OVERLINE]Total Value of Bought Items[/OVERLINE][/B][/list][/SBLOCK] [U][B]Items Sold[/B][/U][SBLOCK][list][*]Item Name (price sold at) [*]Item Name (price sold at) [*]Item Name (price sold at), etc [*][B][OVERLINE]Total Value of Sold Items[/OVERLINE][/B][/list][/SBLOCK] [U][B]Awards[/B][/U][SBLOCK][B][U]Experience Awards[/U][/B][list][*]+? experience points [*]+? experience points [*]+? experience points, etc [*][B][OVERLINE]Total Value of Experience Awards: +? experience points[/OVERLINE][/B][/list] [B][U]Monetary Awards[/U][/B][list][*]+? gold pieces [*]+? gold pieces [*]+? gold pieces, etc [*][B][OVERLINE]Total Value of Monetary Awards: +? gold pieces[/OVERLINE][/B][/list] [B][U]Item Awards[/U][/B][list][*]Item Award [*]Item Award [*]Item Award, etc[/list][/SBLOCK] [B][U]Background[/U][/B][INDENT][I]Character Background Here[/I][/INDENT][/sblock] I’ve gone over each character individually and listed out concerns here. I repeat the comments above (about breaking down numbers) a lot, but that’s just cause it is a pet peeve of mine and I want it done for all the characters. I didn’t add up equipment value yet, but I will when I get another spare minute. Try to double check things like that (if you already have then thanks) so as to save me a little work. Also, I will need to go over these things one more time after all of the stats have been listed out properly. With that out of the way, here we go… [B]GSFRumble[/B][list] [*]List enhancement in front of weapon whenever it appears on your sheet. For instance, your attacks should say “+2 Maul +18/+13.” [*]Your full attack should indicate that the +16/+11 is for your primary weapon and the other +16 is for the off hand. Right now it looks like your full attack includes 3 attacks with a maul or three attacks with a throwing hammer. Clarify this please. [*]Special attacks and qualities should list their source (whether it is race, class, feat, etc). [*]I would prefer if you listed feats and skills in a vertical list (abilities, special attacks, special qualities, and saves would be nice in this format as well). [*]As noted above, ability scores and skills should list all internal components. [*]Your weapons only include the cost of the magical enhancement. You need to add on the base cost for the masterwork weapon. [*]On a note unrelated to technical issues, have you considered using a persistent divine power theme through divine Metamagic? Upping your BAB by 2 (thus granting another attack), Str by 6 and giving you anther 12 HP is always nice.[/list] Note: I will look over your character again when you have broken down the numbers. Right now it is all but impossible to know if your skill point calculations are right, but let me know when you have listed the relevant modifiers and I will take another look. [B]Someone[/B][list] [*]After your ability scores, you should include all the appropriate modifiers that add to the base to reach the final score. [*]This may be my fault, but I’m a little confused about your attacks. I’m guessing the first attack (+21) is if you attack just once in a round as a standard action. The two progressions listed below that (+19/+19/+14/+9 and +19/+14/+9) are supposed to represent the primary and off-hand attacks for a full-attack round right? If you could break those numbers down I would appreciate it. As far as I can tell they are correct, but I’d like to see the breakdown listed on your sheet. [*]If you have a familiar it would be good to specify that under the wizard class features (you have the ability list, but no familiar or benefit). [*]Ride should be +16. [*]I like your contingency. [*]Your double sword should be 21,100 by my calculations (you have the XP cost right though). [*]A minor thing, but could you move the descriptive stats (age, height, etc) to the top?[/list] [B]kyonip[/B][list] [*]Weapons should have their enhancement bonus and/or special abilities as part of their name wherever they appear. [*]HP should have a breakdown by hit dice. [*]Skill points should list the number you get from each class. [*]It would be nice if the special abilities from classes/race were listed in a vertical format under each source. [*]Non-core items should list their source (actually anything non-core should).[/list] [B]Shayuri[/B][list] [*]Break down ability scores. [*]Break down HP. [*]Break down attacks. [*]Break down saves. [*]List how many skill points you get from each class (but you did a fine job of listing out the skills themselves). [*]Generally speaking the character looks fine, but I would like you to show the break down for the numbers.[/list] [B]Erudite[/B][list] [*]Break down ability scores. [*]Break down attacks and damage. [*]Could you put your feats in the order they were taken instead of alphabetical? [*]For some skills you list ability modifier (sense motive for instance), but other ones you don’t. I would prefer that you list it for all skills. [*]You listed the Great Swordbow as costing 8,300, but in RotW it costs 7,150. Is there something else about it that I’m missing?[/list] [B]Rystil[/B][list] [*]You haven’t listed you HP, which should be 85 if I’ve added them up correctly. [*]Break down your saves. [*]I would say break down your attacks, but I really don’t care. [*]The number of skills from each class would be helpful. [*]Somewhere on your sheet you should list money spent and current funds available.[/list] Ok folks, if you would kindly address these things and post a reply when you have done so, I would appreciate it. If I’ve made a mistake somewhere above (which is likely the case), be sure to point that out to so I can take another look. [/QUOTE]
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